|Reviews for New Beginnings|
| Gem of Scath 3/6/11 . chapter 1
I like the way this story is going, then again I like Neapolitan stories. Looking forward to when you update, I hope to se it soon.
| xLauraKx 2/21/11 . chapter 1
Great first chapter, can't wait for more! :)
| SumatraYen 1/11/11 . chapter 1
Hmm... Well this is definitely an interesting chapter. I'm very curious to see where this goes. Do continue!
| Sweet Little Aeris 1/8/11 . chapter 1
I LIK IT SO FAR
JST A FEW LILTYPIN ISSUES BUT NOT BAD
LOV THE 'Chookobo Chick' LINE BTW
GOT A KICK OUTTA THT
| Tear of Light 1/6/11 . chapter 1
This story is off to a great start. You have me very intrigued about what Vanille has planned for them all.
Your characters are in character and your writing is sharp and to the point. No unnecessary things and not too little information that leaves the reader confused.
I look forward to future chapters. :)
| Scraggles 1/3/11 . chapter 1
Quite interesting, if not slightly overdone, what with the threesome idea plot device - never mind that! Anyway, I'm interested to see how this goes. I'm sure Lightning isn't just going to come around with a snap of the fingers now, right?
| Major Mike Powell III 1/3/11 . chapter 1
Well, well, soldier...
HOO-RRAH! 1º review EVAR, btches!
Now, W00T! A new Neapolitan! :DD We need MOAR Neapolitan around here! O
And this one is very nice, to boot! :DD
The ladies were very much in character, and very detailed background information.
And *O* at Light wanting to share her life with somebody! *O* Or...is it somebody'S? ;D
I wanna see where this goes! :3
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Oh yeah, and I hope you had a Happy New Year. :3
Semper-Fi! Carry on!