I like your story!-

Super job! Short yet nice. :D Like the way you write too

HOLY SHIT

So cute, so cute! I wish it were longer...you're very good at writing them, I think.

I'd LOVE to read a chaptered fic of them. I love this pairing, they need a longer story! :D

Aww that was cute. Haha, even Ash knows what's going on. I can imagine hime being like this:

Ash: Where are those two? I'm hungry!

Pikachu: Pikachu-pi Pika. (They're busy at the moment.)

Ash: ...I don't know what you're saying.

xD

Anyway, it was a short sweet fic 8D 5/5

I really like it. I wish it would be longer though. Anyway, I hope you write more fics about this pairing.

Capitalize your title properly.

A drabble means a story that's exactly a hundred words long.