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   aerie-art 12/24/12 . chapter 7If you haven't already, you should totally make a sequel! Seriously...leaving at such a cliff-hanger... Absolutely loved this fanfiction. Keep up the excellent writing! -Aerie |
| z67ywkvp dite kurea-chan 11/12/12 . chapter 7 Mana?! What?! Mais qu'est-ce qu'il fout là?! C'est vraiment Mana? Ou c'est son jumeau? Ou son frère... Neah?! WHAT THE FUCK?! (pardon pour la vulgarité) La suite! La suite! Plus vite! Plus vite! |
| z67ywkvp dite kurea-chan 11/12/12 . chapter 6 Bon... inutil de préciser que ce chapitre est aussi bien que les autres... Tyki veut vraiment qu'Ellen lui appartienne. C'est si mignon. De toute façon, je suis sûre qu'elle va vite y prendre goût! |
| z67ywkvp dite kurea-chan 11/12/12 . chapter 5 wooooow! C'est très interressant! Je me demande si Ellen va encore tomber enceinte. Si c'est l'enfant de Tyki, je suis à 200% "pour" cette option. J'aime bien les passages en portugais aussi (). |
| z67ywkvp dite kurea-chan 11/12/12 . chapter 4 Kyahhhhhhhhhhhh! Tyki est jaloux! Magnifique! Spectaculaire! Magique! Parfait! Fantastique! (Et pleins d'autres adjectifs). (oqo) Je suis complétement accros à tes fictions... (mode zombie) Tykiiiiii... Allennnnn... |
| z67ywkvp dite kurea-chan 11/11/12 . chapter 3 D'abord Tyki, maintenant Kanda... Foutu potion de Komui! Allen n'a même pas son mot à dire! J'ai hâte de connaitre la suite! Big kiss et good job! |
| z67ywkvp dite kurea-chan 11/11/12 . chapter 1 Très bonne fiction. Les perverse comme moi sont servis! |
| Bast14 6/8/12 . chapter 4 Hi the correct form of this sentence: minha amor {my love} is meu amor |
| Bast14 6/8/12 . chapter 2 Hi, this translation is wrong Clame o meu nome como eu faço o meu. {Cry out my name as I make you mine.} It should be: Grite o meu nome enquanto eu a faço minha. Even if this way of writing it is a bit to formal... |
| Clocksmakefunnysounds8393 11/28/11 . chapter 7 Oh my god I am killing myself for a sequel please Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please I will not stop saying please till you do Please please please please please please... |
| Clocksmakefunnysounds8393 11/28/11 . chapter 7 Oh my god I am killing myself for a sequel please Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please I will not stop saying please till you do Please please please please please please... |
| Kumika95 11/15/11 . chapter 7 Good story. But is there going to be a sequel? I think you should TOTALLY make a sequel! |
| Frostfire613 11/8/11 . chapter 1 what language is that? |
| TheOneAndOnlyAzuNyaa 10/4/11 . chapter 1 IS there going to be a sequel? |
| SuperYuuki 9/6/11 . chapter 5 Ooo... That last line from Tyki made me grin. He's actually TRYING to get her pregnant. Personally, I think you're over doing the Portuguese just a little bit. Things I would expect him to want her to understand are being put in foreign. Just little things, though. Nothing extreme. |
