This is a really brilliant story. I wish they used this. Its seriously good. I mean,its difficult to write Arrested Development fanfiction. Theres just something about it that is hard to recreate. im not sure if its the humor or the portraying of the characters. But just ...this...this is amazing

For a minute, I thought this was actual script. This is really good, extremely funny, and beautifully witty.

You, my friend, are awesome. There really needs to be more Arrested Development fanfiction.

Wow, that was hilarious. You really wrote Michael well, and he had the usual wit, sarcasm, and skewed integrity that make him so funny. The ending was a little abrupt, and as another review says, you spelled their last name wrong, but other than that, it was perfection. You managed to write a humorous one-shot for Arrested without just recycling all the catchphrases.

OMG, that read exactly like an episode. i e3njoyd that immensely. Love it. hahahaha

Hur hur hur. Had me chuckling. Reads like an actual episode, I commend you for being witty enough to replicate the style of the show!

One TINY thing however... It is Bluth with no E. Other than that, fantastic. keep up the awesome work!

lol this is freaking awesome. exactly like one of the real eps! hilarious. love it!