Ah, story. I mean, wow. Terrible.

You know how most minorities, regardless of however noble their goals are, are constantly thwarted by a vocal minority who is just the most ridiculous extreme? Right. So, with feminists (Who desire equality between sexes), you get femiNAZIs (Who seem to think that devaluing men is the only way to achieve equality). YOU SIR ARE A FEMINAZI. Feminists want you to shut up.

God, I'd normally be nice and go through shit fics to point out mistakes and ways to improve, but I can't be bothered.

This is horrendous. Got that? No? Okay

THIS. IS. HORRENDOUS.

It's like looking at daleks attempting to have nasty smexxorz and all, in every single story. The poor daleks.

TW

*Is stacking TNT next to this and other Fanfics*
MUST…DESTROY…DIRTY…BAD…FANFICS…