| Reviews for Alma de Hierro |
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Lulu Caty 8/22/12 . chapter 4CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE?! I LOVE IT! I mean who would ever think Miele would be a witch?! |
Lulu Caty 8/22/12 . chapter 1LOVED THE FIRST CHAP! |
Kyree Winx 8/13/12 . chapter 4Welcome back! I'd say that chapter was a good comeback! I hope you'll continue! |
spkdog 8/4/12 . chapter 4You have quite an amazing writing style. Normally, when a story hasn't been updated in months, I have a hard time figuring out what on earth is going on, but I was able to just dive right back into this and enjoy it. Well done. |
LoveLoveLovix 8/4/12 . chapter 4UPDATED YESSSS! Another great chapter, and it looks like the plot's starting to pick up. Great work, Chibi! |
roguescholar07 8/3/12 . chapter 4 I'm too lazy to log in, but I will leave you a nice, long review since it's been so long since you posted anything for this story. Miele really is trying her darndest not to let them know her sister is the guardian fairy, isn't she? I'm betting Lorelei or Octavia eventually get it out of her, though. She can't keep it a secret forever, and I doubt her new friends care all that much. Ooh! Energy-stealing creatures! I can't wait to see where this goes, since neither of us has done it before... Anyway, great work on the chapter! It was worth waiting for! |
Akela Victoire 8/3/12 . chapter 4ITS BEEN SO LONG! Welcome back to the world of updating, Chibi! As usual, great work! |
xForeverEternal 11/4/11 . chapter 2Dude, I LOVE THIS IDEA! Your writing is just plain amazing! One odd thing I noticed: "My parents have some sick sense of humor because the name means eighth and my power involves bugs." Didn't she just argue that spiders aren't bugs? I love it so far! |
RavenWing1997 9/18/11 . chapter 3Chibi Horsewoman do us all a favor and update it is a good story |
spkdog 2/24/11 . chapter 3Awesome chapter! I really love this story! Is Calliope going tp be a reacurring character? I like her. |
rogue-scholar07 2/24/11 . chapter 3Yay! Finally got it back from Rob, I see. I like the impromptu inquisition during lunch. And Calliope. She has the potential to be a fun minor character. |
Ander Arias 2/24/11 . chapter 3It was a pity that Mileie didn't continue talking about her relationship with Flora. CT looks to be a much rougher school than Alfea or RF. The teachers are much more strict and prone to punish, but fits its darker nature. You did a good job fleshing out that. BTW, what's an "MO"? One thing: Belladona was the name of one of the Three Ancient Witches. I don't know if knew it, but maybe you should think in changing it. Although your Belladonna looks to be a bit character. I loved the Marie Antoinette metaphore. Some scratches can be deadlty XD I'm starting to like the pink haired girl. Hope to see more of her. |
After17 2/23/11 . chapter 1 I'm too lazy to log in. (Or am I?) AND I am reviewing a story. Wow. Also, this is the first story of your I've read, I think - maybe? I don't know. But I like it. AND Miele is a much awesomer name than Rose Ftw. AND I hope Miele's power is iron cause... that would be sweeeeeeeet! - And would make for a fully sick fight with Flora, yeah? nature vs. iron? Woah, right? Xx. |
Kyree Winx 2/23/11 . chapter 3Excellent chapter. I wish I could write like this. My stuff is more random. I definitely love the references to Greek mythology. And congratulations! |
Kyree Winx 2/15/11 . chapter 2This is definitely original. But I like it. Nobody would expect Miele of all people to be a witch. And Flora's reaction was kinda expected. I mean she's this goody two shoes guardian fairy who's always fought the witches and it must be shocking to her. That and she's pregnant. You should continue this seriously. |