| Reviews for Paper Bags and Plastic Hearts |
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Nighthawk 8/21/11 . chapter 11 I LOVE this story. I want you to continue this. Just know that I am a big fan of your writing. So please write more |
Sleepy Head Again 7/4/11 . chapter 9 Really Dude? This is f*king, f*ked up! what the f*king,f*king,f**k! Sorry,I know I didn't have to read this..but really...this could have been really good!I thought it was going to be a great story but this turned out to...uh... not be my style,*shivers*...Again,Sorry! |
Sleepy Head 7/3/11 . chapter 8 This was good,soo very you brought in the OC uncle and then it just got fucking creepy! Im not sure if I can even read the rest of this...I under stand that "family sex" is some peoples "cup-of-tea" and thats fine 'n well for them but not for me, uh-uh! No thank you! I'll have to try again in the morning,'cus it's 4:27am and my sleepy brain can't handel the weird fanfictions right now...hehe...I will review again tomorrow when Im not all zzz's..lol |
MissBenji 3/17/11 . chapter 11Gawd I loved this story. And I luv your oc. It was time I got an account here so I could also review better and stuff and your story really wanted me to do that. I realllllllllllly luv it. But might I advice getting a beta? Just an idea... YOUR STORY ROCKS! |
MissBenji 3/15/11 . chapter 11Gawd I loved this story. And I luv your oc. It was time I got an account here so I could also review better and stuff and your story really wanted me to do that. I realllllllllllly luv it. But might I advice getting a beta? Just an idea... YOUR STORY ROCKS! |
robbie84 2/19/11 . chapter 11 keep writing! |
l2s2 2/3/11 . chapter 11yay there back together |
Zeoness 1/18/11 . chapter 11D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! YAY! I can't wait for the next installment. |
Zeoness 1/17/11 . chapter 10I don't think they should have sex. |
Oscar 1/16/11 . chapter 10 Please, whatever you do don't let Fabian and Ryan have sex. I want Ryan and Jimmy together in the end. And there would be so much fighting and regret and angst if Fabian and ryan did something. |
Xiaolin101 1/15/11 . chapter 10Jimmy and Ryan shall meet again at the motel they are staying in plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz |
Sexy-chan 1/14/11 . chapter 9omg! pedophila D: lol jk! XD awesome chap :) |
Sexy-chan 1/12/11 . chapter 1OMFG I TOTTAL FORGOT ABOUT UR STORY (stress of writing my own stories, bullies, scholl work... catching a cold every month... :)awesome chap though! |
ILive4Irony417 1/11/11 . chapter 4Please add a trigger warning with chapters that involve descriptive cutting! It was written wonderfully btw! You have the emotion behind it down to a T! I'm not trying to be mean, but I am a recovering cutter and my reason for it was to forget, too. Not to forget the same things as Jimmy, but the sentiments are pretty much the same. |
xX-Yuna-Zoey-Xx 1/7/11 . chapter 5yur not that nice :/ So are True & Lulu going to help Jimmy get get back together? and YU HAVE TO MAKE THEM KISS AGIAN SOON lol ther so cute togetehr |