I can't deny that choosing such a tragic ending for them left a greater emotional impact than simply ending it a la disney style BUT the inner hufflepuff in me is demanding for a sequel where somehow they both survive and do end up getting their happily ever after. Don't you know that characters coming back to life miraculously is all the rage in fanfics? -wink wink-

:(((((((! So sad!

This is completely sick, and fuck I loved it. I've read this a few times now but it always gets me, so I figured I should review. Anyway it's such a twisted and horrific story which is undeniably beautiful, a perfect story for a perfect pairing. Excuse me while I go and cry again. Never stop writing. Ever. x

Wow... You just really know how to write this stuff. It's amazing.
I've read a fair few of your stories, and every time they amaze me.
It's not only the way that you write, but the fact that you have these incredible little ideas and then you actually sit down and hash them out, write them down. I can never seem to do that.
Would me asking you to never stop writing come across as awfully selfish?

Love the twist where they posion eachother absolutely love this story sad though :( :) xxx

Fuck. And yes, that was my reaction to your little twist at the end there. I'm not sure if it was because of the situation, or out of awe for what you did there. Either way, well done!

Well written. And I know them dying makes this a tragedy, especially when you work out when they poisoned each other, but awwww. They die together. It's morbidly cute.

I like and dislike this story...the ending was sad but at the same time :/

Awww This was so sweet and adorable. I loved it!

Just wow I mean so many words to use and I just can't pick one but I can say this better than Romeo and Juliet in a tragic relationship that would never end well.

Awww, this was so cute!...and sad! xxx :)

Awesome story :D The ending is great even thought they both killed each other... but still awesome :) keep up the good work! :)

It's a sorrowful, but very beautiful piece of work. I do hope that wherever they're heading (in the afterlife or something), they'll be together. Forever (XD)

so sad. but worthy to read.

The end was so unexpected that I stared hard at my laptop screen for 10 minutes straight. Seriously. Very well written though, even if it was kinda sad for me. Dx