Coopdates Cole. Would have reviwed sooner, but my laptop keeps freezing and slowing down my reading pace

Wow... Such a cool story! I really hope Rogue and Will reunite again! I feel sorry for Tira and Rogue though. They are living people but have to sorta sacrifice themselves for another person.

Great story! Hope you'll be writing more!

This was a great chapter and a great ending!

I can’t wait to see the next story in the series!

So, Rogue has now been captured by Phobos turned Ansem where I assume she will be placed in the Simulated Twilight Town.

I wonder what will happen to Rogue now.

It's sad that Tira had to die/get absorbed by Rogue.

And now Rogue is leaving the Forsaken with hopes of meeting Will; I wonder what will happen next.

Wow! The Forsaken are getting rid of each other!

This gets more and more interesting

Whoa! What’s up with Cole? He seems so out of it!

I wonder what’s going to happen with Tira now that she’s gone with Phobos and Cedric to meet Dawn.

This was an awesome chapter!

I really liked Hiro, he was funny!

Great Chapter!

And another chapter down, how many more do you have to go before we run out of pre made chapters?

Looks like Rogue is starting ot get the meroeis faster then ever, wonder how this will effect the plans of her group? Can;t wait to see the next chapter :) (wonder why no one esle has revied yet? You usually get some on and off people by now)

Another great cahpter Cole :)

PS Might not able able to post in the forum today, the work computer is having issues with loading pages today (probably because its using Explorer 6 and most sites are using new versions, i'll try again later and hopefully make some prgoress on the bleach topic)

Another great chapter Cole, though you might want to lfesh out the battles a little more (I think you mentioned it was a few chapters in boefre you got past two attack per battle, but thought i would metioned this just add more 'body' to the review)

Another great chapter DREAMCOLE, glad to see Rogue found a second person in the group she can get along with.

So far, it seems only one of the group really givea a heck about Rogue and the others seem to see her and burden they need (though pretty sure swec still have a few more oCs to go form what I rembeer of the list, so some might listen up compred to the last two guys we have seen)