hi ya can you please update soon its been a few weeks!:) :) :) :)

really good story any chance of all your chaptees being this long? :)

Damn this is getting good. I seriously CANNOT WAIT until the next chapter. :D

I've currently read up to chapter 6 in this story, and I'm hooked! Your vocabulary is astounding, and your spot-on characterization even more so. I have to confess, I've read your bio and Laura, though an interesting character, seems a bit too much like a reader-insert for my taste. I don't mean to offend, but perhaps in the future you could focus more on her as an individual. That is, of course, unless you've already changed her personality for when she and Professor Layton meet in the present, and I have not yet reached that point. In any case, those are my thoughts at the moment. I will continue to read this with pleasure!

"Now then, girls, as anticlimactic as it sounds, unfortunately we must return to archaeology, so if you'll please turn to page 394. We'll be skipping a few chapters…"

I GOT THAT REFERENCE AND I LOVE IT!

You are part of only a few in 100's of fan fics who actually portrays Layton as he is in the games

welldone for shops not stores

blocks-BUILDINGS
middle school- KEY STAGE 2
high school- SECONDARY SCHOOL

folling on from my last comment we don't have electives either.

I have usefull information, Professor layton lives in London which is in England not America so semesters don't exist we call them term's.

Phew! It took me forever to finish but it was an awesome chapter, as always! Can't wait til the next one! I love long reads :) Hopefully there will be a little more connecting with Hershel and Laura, I always love finding the little bits of attraction they have towards each other though they try to hide it.

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter,

Yashimura-san

I like your stroy a lot, how you've made it truly in the the style of the games (puzzles, and mysterious towns, and and a toucan) and not gone off with the characters on your own agenda. I appreciate it. I hope for more updates in the future!

I thought I should leave a review as no one's left one yet, even though this was a very good chapter! Your writing is impeccable as always, I'm sure you know that by now (to me it's impeccable anyways, i can't write to save my life XD)
Oh and, I am also sorry about your health, but stay strong! I have gluten intolerance as well and I was really sad, because I had to miss all my favourite foods (just like you), but you get used to it eventually.. so stay strong!

Anyway I can't wait to see where this is going! Gaaaawsh I'm really curious... What did Layton find out?! oh and, loving the little Laura/Layton moments as always. ..Laura doesn't mind Layton's germs teehee..XD Please update soon, soon, soon! but most importantly, take care of yourself!

will we ever find out who drugged Laura and why she was drugged? D: Or did I just miss something in this chapter?

Wonderful story, I've read everything from chapter 1 to 31 in just a day! (even though I was meant to do my homework..) The relationship between Laura and Layton is so interesting. I'm also really curious what will happen in Stabilnon... This story is amazing, I REALLY hope you'll update soon! I need to find out what happens next!