|Reviews for Something Unexpected|
| Andorian Ice Princess-AIP 6/17/13 . chapter 18
Hi dollydarwloo (you dont have an account so am not sure how to even reply to you) sorry..am confused...you want to write a sequel to MY story? um...no sorry I have never allowed that b/c well am not sure how it would play out. sorry please create an account so we can talk further b/c this has me nervous.
| dollydarwloo 6/17/13 . chapter 18
I realize that the program is not on anymore, but I would love to write my own sequel to this if that is alright with you? I have some ideas that I would like to play out.
| J 5/14/13 . chapter 4
The First bit was intrestiing but dead in the same time too long and wouldnt attract peoples attention
| lori51 5/26/12 . chapter 18
Found today, read straight through and couldn't put it down! Loved it all and looking forward to reading mire of your stuff. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
| Joan Stump 4/23/12 . chapter 18
I loved this story- you struck just the right note with each part of the atory. It was exciting, suspenseful, and everyone was completely in character. Extremely well done! Thank you so much.
| dollydarwloo 12/7/11 . chapter 18
A sequel would be very nice. Especially to see if the baby that they want is a little girl and then life beyond.
| dollydarwloo 10/8/11 . chapter 18
more on this would be nice. I would love to see Stetlers reaction when he finds out that Horatio and Calleigh are married.
Also I hope to see more on the little family and how they progress.
| C. S. Tolkien 7/7/11 . chapter 18
I have to ask, this is an AU?
And if isnt in what season is located, in the first or much more before the first season?
| dollydarwloo 5/31/11 . chapter 18
I do not remember if I told you before. A sequel would be nice, with a new plot or twist to it. I would also like to see a new story about Calleigh and Horatio.
| elislin 5/12/11 . chapter 18
Very sweet ending, I enjoyed this story very much, thank you for sharing it.
I'll be reading your future stories :)
| rocksmacked 5/7/11 . chapter 18
It's great chapter! Love it! It's wonderful ending! love it! YESSSSSSSS, more squeal!
| osarisanhur 5/5/11 . chapter 18
A wonderful ending. Great fic. I loved it.
let me know how you liked this chapter, this story and if you'd even want another (either sequel or new story). - now let me think do I want another. YEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS. Silly question-you know me, if I had my way your fics would never end.
Maybe we can be there for the new baby's arrival.
Here's looking forward to the next one.
| calleigh16 5/4/11 . chapter 18
Please make another story or continue with this one ! I love it and would love for Horatio and Calleigh to have a baby! Calleigh16
| StellaBonaseraTaylor 5/4/11 . chapter 18
Hi my friend,
You know for me you'd never finish your stories lol.
They're always amazing and addictive, I just want to continue reading this... hum... let me see... forever? lol
Thanks for sharing with me and your other readers these magnificent stories written with such zeal, attention, care, affection, talent and pleasure.
Saying it's a delight to read something of yours is the least I can do to repay everything you give me through your stories.
A new lesson is always learned from your stories such as 'life is short and we must always seize the opportunities offered to us' 'second chances aren't given quite often so when that happens we hold it and not let go' 'have anyone to love and be loved is a gift that should never have as granted' and many others.
So with your wisdom and experience you teache many things. So thanks for that. :)
Well, you deserve a prize, you made me read a Miami story, enjoy it (too much) and made me want to do a sequel, then another and another and another. You have the power my friend. haha
Okay, you know I didn't want this to end and I'm sad to know that won't read new chapters to this story, but I know you have new ideas and need to finish your stories to get other so just for that reason I've forgiven you. lol
I loved this story since I read the first chapter and I was crazy to continue, I was really elated and couldn't read it fast enough to go to the next chapter. And it's your merit, your ability and talent hooked me in this story and made me like H. lol
Well let's go to the review right?
I thought you were perfect in the way you started the chapter, is a beautiful scene to imagine and warm the heart, listen to her child laughing after having lived a nightmare and the care and attention from her husband in trying to make the day start in a happy way. I loved it and for me the chapter was already perfect just that, but you wanted more and I thank you for that as everything was really perfect.
Well, of course when he's grown up and can understand things Kyle will learn about Julia, but when this happens he and Calleigh will have a bond as strong as a mother/son that nothing can interfere with that, and he'll always know that he's loved by his two mothers.
I like the way you brought this matter because one day he'll know the truth but he'll have his parents with him to understand and overcome it all.
Well I really like H as a husband and father, a true example. And he always wants to be better than what he is
and always worried about never become the figure he most fears to be one day, his father.
I love to see Kyle around Calleigh, so natural and spontaneous, you really know how to describe the children, and how do people want to have children, if the world population in the coming years increase so prominently, I won't be surprised if what is common among new mothers is that they read all your stories haha.
I loved them in the park so incredible, just having an afternoon in family and enjoying the little boy they have.
Disney's idea was great, what child doesn't get mesmerized by it (and adults too lol). And she saying that she wants to have a little girl, a little Calleigh, I'd love to see Kyle as Big Brother.
Then you have to write a sequel. lol
I think H is more sure of his fathers skills and he'll spoil this little girl too. lol
I loved him and Rick, he teasing Rick with the lego thing, it was fun.
As frank telling them about Rick and him in the same room, I really had fun reading this part.
The entire chapter was perfect and I'm totally falling for Kyle, Ijust wanna hold him forever lol.
Thanks for the huge smile on my face right now:)
Many warm hugs
SBT (your incurable fan, reader, follower and cyber friend)
| Roots4Miami 5/3/11 . chapter 18
Thank you! Thank you! What a wonderful ending! Loved ALL of it. It's very nice to see Horatio so happy. He has a family of his own at last. Love the idea of a little girl. And of course we need to see this continue! Like the Lego secret that H now has over Rick. Maybe that will come in handy some day? Thanks again for a great story!