 StellaBonaseraTaylor 5/4/11 . chapter 18Hi my friend,
Final chapter:(
You know for me you'd never finish your stories lol.
They're always amazing and addictive, I just want to continue reading this... hum... let me see... forever? lol
Thanks for sharing with me and your other readers these magnificent stories written with such zeal, attention, care, affection, talent and pleasure.
Saying it's a delight to read something of yours is the least I can do to repay everything you give me through your stories.
A new lesson is always learned from your stories such as 'life is short and we must always seize the opportunities offered to us' 'second chances aren't given quite often so when that happens we hold it and not let go' 'have anyone to love and be loved is a gift that should never have as granted' and many others.
So with your wisdom and experience you teache many things. So thanks for that. :)
Well, you deserve a prize, you made me read a Miami story, enjoy it (too much) and made me want to do a sequel, then another and another and another. You have the power my friend. haha
Okay, you know I didn't want this to end and I'm sad to know that won't read new chapters to this story, but I know you have new ideas and need to finish your stories to get other so just for that reason I've forgiven you. lol
I loved this story since I read the first chapter and I was crazy to continue, I was really elated and couldn't read it fast enough to go to the next chapter. And it's your merit, your ability and talent hooked me in this story and made me like H. lol
Well let's go to the review right?
I thought you were perfect in the way you started the chapter, is a beautiful scene to imagine and warm the heart, listen to her child laughing after having lived a nightmare and the care and attention from her husband in trying to make the day start in a happy way. I loved it and for me the chapter was already perfect just that, but you wanted more and I thank you for that as everything was really perfect.
Well, of course when he's grown up and can understand things Kyle will learn about Julia, but when this happens he and Calleigh will have a bond as strong as a mother/son that nothing can interfere with that, and he'll always know that he's loved by his two mothers.
I like the way you brought this matter because one day he'll know the truth but he'll have his parents with him to understand and overcome it all.
Well I really like H as a husband and father, a true example. And he always wants to be better than what he is
and always worried about never become the figure he most fears to be one day, his father.
I love to see Kyle around Calleigh, so natural and spontaneous, you really know how to describe the children, and how do people want to have children, if the world population in the coming years increase so prominently, I won't be surprised if what is common among new mothers is that they read all your stories haha.
I loved them in the park so incredible, just having an afternoon in family and enjoying the little boy they have.
Disney's idea was great, what child doesn't get mesmerized by it (and adults too lol). And she saying that she wants to have a little girl, a little Calleigh, I'd love to see Kyle as Big Brother.
Then you have to write a sequel. lol
I think H is more sure of his fathers skills and he'll spoil this little girl too. lol
I loved him and Rick, he teasing Rick with the lego thing, it was fun.
As frank telling them about Rick and him in the same room, I really had fun reading this part.
The entire chapter was perfect and I'm totally falling for Kyle, Ijust wanna hold him forever lol.
Thanks for the huge smile on my face right now:)
Many warm hugs
SBT (your incurable fan, reader, follower and cyber friend) |
 Amythest Lilly 5/3/11 . chapter 18Makes me want to go back to Disney World. I went years ago. It was an experience. I loved this story and would love to see a sequel with Calleigh pregnant. That would be interesting! H would have to keep the hormonally charged woman away from the guns! Wouldn't it be great to see them though really happy and as a real family. Well, as close to a normal family as one could get with two police parents, and a myraid of aunts and uncles who were police as well. Gee, nothing bad could possibly happen...%S what in the world am I saying! Anyway, if you do another I want to know about it :D, I really enjoy your writing.
Amythest Lily |