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DarkestTruth 3/5/12 . chapter 1
That's the reason I hate avatars.

If people don't work to fix their own problems, this is what happens.

They find some poor soul to fix their issues for them.

And that the poor soul is a CHILD makes it even crueler, because all of a sudden they are chained down with the responsibility of THE ENTIRE WORLD.

God dammmit, that's Atlas's job!
titpuce86 5/12/11 . chapter 1
That's very beautiful. All your serie on the different avatars' feelings is great and that particular OS isn't an exception to that. I love it.
Metella 1/30/11 . chapter 1
Hm, I thought Northern Water Tribe didn't teach females waterbending?

Interesting take on the Air Nuns. We really don't know much about them, but if they are anything like the stereotypes of Christian nuns, they could quite possibly be strict and withdrawn.
Seeking-Truth-Darkness 1/6/11 . chapter 1
I have to say that I really do adore your Avatar stories, they always seem to put a smile on my face.

All I can say about this one is that this line:

"I am Kuruk," the man says then, "and I'm sorry."

This was powerful and it made my heart skip beat.

Pretty damn fantastic as always. *tosses cupcakes at you*
Shizuku Tsukishima749 1/5/11 . chapter 1
Wow! The ending was absolutely poignant! *U* LOVED IT! Gorgeous! Poor Kyoshi! Rock on! I LOVE your introspective, speculative work! *U*
TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba 1/5/11 . chapter 1
This one really tugged on my heartstrings. I felt for her, and Kuruk even.
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