Not bad, one of the most well written Malec fic around the fandom, and i really like how you write it.
Btw, Godfrey Gao seriously rockz the part as Magnus Bane, so hopefully you like him enough to write more Malec fic in the future, keep up the good work and god bless you.

This. Story. ROCKS!

You should write Malec more often :D

This was epic! Everyone was perfectly in characters and it had the write amount of fluff, funny moments and plot!

Good story but shouldve had just a little more graphic sex stuff. And i love the mortal instuments books! And yes they shoulve had more on their relationship. Great story though!:DD

Fantastic! Loved the plot and your writing style is awesome! D

Awesome oneshot! I love all the reasons Alec knew the demon Magnus was a fake, so sweet! And it's sweet because Alec doesn't even know he's being romantic!

Loved this oneshot! I knew that the Magnus with messy eyeliner was the demon!

Wishing you the best,

Auphora66

I just have to say I LOVED this story. I can't even begin to tell you if it was the plot, or the well written characters, or just the writing that did it but it was amazing. If you hadn't already thought about it I would say definitely keep writing Magnus and Alec because you excel at it.

That was fantastic! :D I loved the whole idea of it, and the parts where Alec was describing, in detail, all the subtle differences between the demon and Magnus were so adorable :D (And I was just listening to "Boys, Boys, Boys." How did you know? :D)

This is the first fanfic I have read for Alec and Magnus. I am stunned and in awe! It was charming, sexy, and down right adorable! You are an amazing writer.

wow. that was long...loved it all.

love the beginning. thats my favorite scene in kuroshituji. ciel makes a pretty girl. XD

Alec is so cute when he was saying the differences.

That. Was. Amazing. I loved how you drew us in with implications of something else, then revealed the real situation later. You had me hooked and then reeled me in. I loved it all. The action and the lovely malec bits which were a beautiful mixture of serious, playful, and sexy. :D Awesome fanfic!

love this story! Nephilim vibrator! so funny

you have also brought something to my attention i didn't notice this until now but where you wrote

Pandemonium was much the same as it'd been that fateful night when Isabelle, Jace and I first met Clary – an encounter I'd resented at first, but eventually came to appreciate; after all, Clary's appearance in our lives brought Magnus into mine.

it occurred to me that clary brought all of the couples together in this story, alec and magnus , izzy and simon and her and jace! that's real neat!

one tiny thing though (no criticism or anything but you wrote:

"You've killed thousands of demons over the course of your lifetime. It won't hurt you or them if you sit this one out,

and alec hasnt killed that many has he because in one book he admitted that he has never killed a demon before!

love it though

I loved the story, it was amazing :)

I'm not good at this whole reviewing lark, but hell, this is too good to read n' run, so I'll give it a go. I've been a big fan of your Zero/Yuuki series for a long time, so I was completely jazzed to see a Mortal Instruments fic from you. THEN it ended up being of my favourite pairing, which doesn't get nearly enough of the love it deserves, so I pretty much had a spaz-attack then and there.

My favourite thing about it was probably that it was told in first person. I'm not generally a fan of that writing style, since it usually comes across awkward and the tenses get mixed up a lot, but you've mastered writing first person beautifully. Alec was my favourite character in the books and you did him all kinds of justice.

Then there's how you write Magnus. Oh boy. Even though I adore Magnus/Alec, after trying a few fanfics for them, I just had to give up. No matter how well written they were, I just couldn't find one that portrayed Magnus to his full level of epicness, or his glitter for that matter. You've got his relationship with Alec, yet haven't b*asterdised his character along the way.

And that's another thing. Now, I fall into this rut myself so I suppose I can't talk, but you haven't made their relationship all sunshine-and-daisies. Even though there was fluff, you haven't completely ignored the issue of Magnus' immortality, or Alec's shyness, etc. so I have to hand it to you for that.

The pop culture references were golden ;)

You've got a great grasp on the English language, a surprisingly rare thing on a site for writing. I couldn't find any errors or anything, which of course only adds to the reading experience.

Well, I've rambled on long enough. Can you tell I loved this fic? I hope so. The first Mortal Instruments fic that I finished and just HAD to review. A fantastic first Malec from you, and I hope it's not the last.