This was so terribly heartbreaking, yet so good. It gave me feels.

Again. You've done it again. But this time it hurts so much more and I really need to stop reading fanfiction before I'm caught up with the story (I'm learning things I shouldn't know about! Ten II? Gah I'm ruining this for myself, aren't I?) but I just can't. I need the Doctor and Rose to be together unlike anything I've ever needed before and it just hurts. Season 3 does that to you. I've only just finished the episode where Ten takes Martha to New Earth, and there's been these little stinging reminders of Rose in every episode since Doomsday. It hurts, oh god does it ever stop hurting?

Anyway, ramble done. I still love Eleven. You write him so well and I can't wait to meet him except I have to watch this show slowly because it hurts too much and my heart can only take so many feels in a short period of time.

Anyway, great story. Loved it!

Song

I can imagine him thinking all of this really!

Okay this one broke my heart and WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THAT but I'm going to be honest. I loved it. Even though I ship 11/River. your writing is just fantastic 3

Oh, that was heartbreaking.

My poor heartbroken Eleven.

Haha, oh... oh this was soo good! I loved being inside his mind, wishing along with him. You are a wonderful writer!

BAWWWW I love this :( It makes me wibble and cry. I miss Rose terribly, and I'd love it if she and Eleven were to meet at some point. This was lovely, thank you. :)

This was beautiful 3

Aww, that was sad, but sweet. Too bad something like that didn't really happen in Seasons 5 or 6! But great story as usual! :)

I really enjoyed that, ProfessorSpork. Iiked the Doctor's narrative voice. It was bittersweet, but well written. I liked the image of Rose straightening his tie and braces. Nice.

Very sad. Great job!

I would love to see a story with this theme. A set of chapters of the Doctor's 11th, 12th and 13th regenerations visiting Rose when she's left alone. *hint, hint*

That was lovely, especially the last few lines.

This is absolutely amazing. Everything I've ever wanted in a story and more. The reddiness to forget his feelings for amy's sake is heartbreaking. If I could put into words how much I really love this it would be a much longer review I promise. Heartbreaking, tearjerking, and absolutely, 100% beautiful.