Wow, this was COOL. I really enjoyed reading and everyone felt very in-character to me. Especially Jack was adorable :D I still like him, despite of what he did.
Good work!
Have a nice day :)

sweety !

I would really like to see them as a couple in the manga !

Awww so cute! I loved it! And I have the same question as the person under me, I know about Jack being the third son, but does he really have two sisters? Hah I'm surprised at the things I don't know about Pandora Hearts, I've been searching on the wiki all day because there are so many things I don't understand! Anyway, I'll stop rambling now, loved the oneshot, you could even make a chapter fic from this! :D :3

Cute little one shot that is well written. Interesting family. Does Jack really have two brothers and sisters in cannon? I can't remember...