Great story so far hope to read more :)

*hums* My favorite part is still where Zak turns Moltervoi into a frog.

And I wanna play with him when you're done with him. *evil grin*

You've got a pretty cool story here and I like the creativity that you're using with the story line. I'd really like to read more!

*does a dance of evil, evil glee* About time Momo! I'm so happy Princess got on your ass to post it.

Genius, awesome, sexy, hot, *nomnom* and all the other awesome words I can't think up right now. Though holy shit, that was really long.