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MissingMommy 5/23/11 . chapter 1
I loved it. And I also like the story The lady or the tiger.
on rooftops 3/5/11 . chapter 1
I've missed your writing so much. And I know that this has been up for ages and that I absolutely suck for not reading it earlier but life's been crazy and such things and tonight I just had to read it and I love it very very much, of course. Because it's your writing and your Lily and your Teddy and they're all so perfect. The scene in the kitchen is beyond magnificent; I love the way you've portrayed Teddy and Lily in it, especially the way you've included Teddy's thoughts.

I believe I'm rambling but this is gorgeous and I'm happy I finally read it and I'm sorry it took so long.

xx
save the world and be a hero 2/16/11 . chapter 1
*sigh* I love Slytherin Lily. I love LilyTeddy. :)

This was really cute and emotional and well written and I really liked it :)

I use too many 'and's :S
yellow 14 1/7/11 . chapter 1
Nice. Keep writing
sweet-dreamrose 1/7/11 . chapter 1
When I read the ending of this story I could picture Teddy choosing to be with her, probably due to my penchant for happy endings.

But when it comes to The Lady or the Tiger, I agree that she picks the Tiger. I too, felt so unsatisfied at the ambiguity of the ending. The sequel, The Discourager of Hesitancy promised to resolve what happened but it ends with a similar conundrum, to my eternal frustration!
jaime-lannisters 1/7/11 . chapter 1
Personally I think he should say no
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