awesome writing!

I have to say, I loved it. Very nice piece.

Cool writing style much? Kind of confusing(ish) but really adds a lot of personality! An interesting plot, so I hope to see more development soon3!

I loved it! I really like how you wrote Cesare *nods*

Keep it up! I will be more than happy to read more, it is really nice

I liked it! I thought you captured Ezio's confusion and slight panic well with the broken thoughts. Though I was a little confused at points as to what was happening I was still able to follow the story! KUDOS TO YOU! *showers you with cookies* )