well, i won't lie. that was cute but i really can't imagine mukuro having body seen as beautiful to others. she said it herself after all that she detests the side of her body that is unmarred. and as for the last name...i don't think Hiei has one at all. Jaganshi is just a title. I mean, even Enki and Kouku don't have last names. Just saying. Buuuuuuut, all in all, i thought your story was cute.

mayuumi

this is a nice story

Yay for you finding this one! I really liked this one, it was very interesting, and Hiei's kids sound so cute. _

So good job, and kudos for you!

I read TAOD, and I had to read this one. Of course, it was great! I wasn't scared away by it at all! I'm glued to your YYH fics! Like I said, write more soon! Ja ne!

WPY

I just love how you write. Great job! A litle too short, and I wanted to read more about it, but...that's when you have time. _

heehee... I like this fic... like i like all the other fics you have. :) And I think the HieixMukuro pairing seems just fine to me.. more than fine actually

You know, I've never subscribe to that idea that Hiei and Kurama had a 'thing' going on. YEH! Finally someone agreed! And, no. This one hadn't scare me away.