Update soon. I can'twait to see what happens next.

Are you going to continue this story? Its been some time since you last updated.. :/ Anywho the story is well written so far and the plot is interesting.. so pls update soon? :)

This is really good! Please don't tell me you're discontinuing it. Keep up the good work, in the name of youth! :puts up thumb, and does that creepy Gai smile:

I love this story!:D

It is a FANTASTIC plot and I think you captured the characters' personalities very well.:)

Love the story Please continue!:D

Loving it so far. Cant wait to see how Dei and Sasori's relationship evolves

Hey sis! K so I know you were yelling at me to read and review and so I am! You did awesome and the KakuHida hint was really funny! Anyways update soon! :D

KakuHida Forever!

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thanks for the update! seriously! :D

I'll help you know. I m very good at plot creating but i have problems putting it into words.

I think you're doing pretty good! Keep it up! :D

Ah well I just found about your story today :) It's very good if I must say. Don't worry people will find about this story too! Don't give up!

- Seru-Chan

like it.

i think it is good. so... MAKE MORE!

Heh, this sounds like it'll be an interesting adventure for Sasori, muy interesting indeed... X3

You did an awesome job at description but it does seem kind of rushed towards the end, not that I can really say anything because I rushed my own story but it was awesome and remember Onee-chan, I know where you sleep, so update soon!

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Awesome chappie sis! I really liked it! And you better update soon!... I know where you live ) Dleep with one eye open... Mwhahahahahahahaha!

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Wow this is really good. It seems like a really good plot I'm sure it'll get even better with the following chapters. Your writing has a professional feeling to it which makes it easier to read.