Ugh, that was tough to read, it made me really sad that Edward gave him up in the end, even after realizing that he loved him. what a jack ass! so sad!

*sob* That was *sniffle* really, really sad *sob* and beautiful… *wails loudly*

Way too angsty for a wuss like me but still, thank you for sharing. *wipes nose in sleeve*

I absolutly love Jasper and this proves why. He's such a southern gentleman. Rosalie can die in a hole of acid. Anyways, this story is great, I love it, I honestly thought you were going to have Jasper commit suicide.

i can't help it, I had to re-read this over because I love it so much, but since I've already reviewed on Tiff's page... thought I'd review here and let you know how much i loved it!

You girls are fantastic and i wouldn't say no to another collab with y'all in the future!

xoxo

Please can you do a follow up to this story it would be wonderful to Rose to be thrown aside and for Jas and Ed to have their happy ending.

This is probably the 5th time i have read this story but, the first time i am reviewing. I love this story so much. I know exactly how Jasper feels and i cant help but think Edward is a coward for 1: not talking to Jasper and letting him know he needs time and 2: not leaving Rosalie after he realized Jasper had left. Even with all that i understand being lost; not knowing who you are much less anything else so i am not mad at him. I would greatly appreciate you guys continuing this one shot in to a full story. Pretty please with a Jasper on top.

I read the story on tiffaninichole's profile, but to make things even :)

*sobs* heartbreaking. I know not everything's HEA, but damn... these two deserve it.

Very well done, very hot lemon and great background!

xx

wow this story is something else. you can di so much with this story i hope that you will continue this. you have so much to work with lmao i do hope that Jasper comes back and that Edward gets his butt kicked for mot going after him. i also hope that rose get hurt i really dont like that but the way she downed Jasper i can not stand for that. no no i can not. but why did Jasper leave why when he loved him.

well till next time bye now.\

p.s plz make this in to a chapter story if you dont i will die and haunt you. jk ... not treally heheh XD

This was amazing. I loved it. You two write beautifully together.

Kathy

Oh damn. Beautifull story but I kind of hate the ending...Just want J&E together!

Oh, how sad for both of them. I'm a little pissed at both of them too. Great story, though. I hope you guys will think of extending this after the contest.

Yay a non happy ending! Great work!

I Love it...Iwanna know what happens next!

hey girl... please tell me this isn't a one-shot... they deserve so much more...

effing rich snots... think they know everything... *grumbles*

I need more of these boys... *begging here*

Take care

Definite tears for this one. Why wouldn't he go after Jasper after making such a huge realization and why would he believe Jasper would bother coming back? If you do decide to continue please let Edward get his butt kicked a bit.