Good story!

I commend you for your characterization of Eragon. Far too many slash fics on this site have him as the shy, awkward virgin who's unwilling to speak his mind. I like that you had him make the first move. .

It made me feel all gooey and warm inside! I love your writing style. Write more, please!

awww so sweet! love it!

Pathetic...

Not your writing... that's good.

But the character is pathetic. I am definitely NOT into this coupling {incest as well} but when I do stumble onto them, I have to wonder why someone promoting gay relationships would make the characters so pathetic and whiney. Not really helping the cause, I think.

This is my one and only review of this fanfic.

You make it sound like Eragon and Murtagh are gay when you mention some first kiss. Is that intentional? Because I know Eragon's an idiot, but I didn't actually think that he would do anything like kissing a boy.

I really liked it. It made me smile. Yes, I know the story starts out sad, but the end was really sweet.

You've made me miss "canon" stories. Weird, really, since I prefer AU. Hehe.

Loved it. Thank you for sharing.

SK