Man I LOVED that part in the movie, where Robert told that bastard off for not giving Trip and the others new shoes I haven't read this in a LONG while so sorry for the late comment TT

Hi! :) Yay! You're back! :) Good luck in high school! Anyway, I liked this chapter. The shoe store scene in the movie was one of my favorites and I'm glad that it was in this story. I also liked the you portrayed the emotions of each of the characters. Well, I can't wait until the next chapter! :)

I missed reading this series. Welcome back!

This story needs a prequel . It wool make more sense if it did it would make more sense. Love the daughter idea.

this story is pritty cool

Hi! :) I liked this chapter. I do have a suggestion though. When you are writing down a dream, vision, or a memory like you did for Kiara's, maybe have that part in italics, and the writing in present tense in the regular style. I hope that made sense. Well, I can't wait until the next chapter! :)

Long time since reading a chapter from you. Your writing,as always is amazing! TQM

Hey Emma! Yeah, too lazy to log in. But, anyways, I really liked this chapter, especially when Kiara has that little flashback of the battle. Wish you'd have put a little more description into that. You know I love that kind of stuff. -

Even though it is a short chapter, I still really like it. I'll be keeping my eyes peeled for updates!

P.S.

Sims is an addicting game. o.e

Hey! I believe I've already reviewed this chapter, but if not, it's great! As usual, your writing is spectacular. I'm looking forward to your next update, whenever it may be

Could you possibly do me a favor? Since the author Shinkirin has disabled anonymous reviews, I can't tell them how much I like their story. If you wouldn't mind in your next review of "All's Fair in Love and War" could you mention that Lovemusic2 enjoys their story but doesn't have an account? It would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Again, keep up the great work! You're an awesome author.

i really like your writing style! i reeeeaaaaaalllly want to know what happens next (well, i kindof already know cuz i watched the movie at school) but i want to know what happens to kiara! please update!

Hi! :) I thought that this chapter was quite interesting. The letter from Robert to Kiana was quite touching. I also thought that seeing Kiana's past life was quite informative to read and interesting to see that she was able to do that especially since she managed to get away from Annie and everything. Well, I can't wait until the next chapter! :)

Nicely written. I can't wait to read the next chapter

Hey Emma.

In all honesty, this chapter was a little... "..."

Just, like, I dunno, but it feels as if something's missing.

Don't get me wrong, overall it's a good story, but this chapter... What can I say? It was kinda boring. Sorry if I sound like a bitch.

I did like the part about Kiara being an aide. Interesting.

See ya,

-Meg

Hi! :) I did like this chapter, but I wish you could use quotation marks. It's sometimes hard to follow who's actually saying something. Anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter! :)

And on the topic of Chapter 13, I just saw Harry Potter too. I cried the instant I saw the Warner Bros logo and didn't stop throughout the entire movie.