That was a great story I love the mistmantle chronicals so much!

Awesome! I really like this fanfic, you're a great writer and I'm really looking forward to the next update!

hi everyone Molly Maze has herby changed to MollyMaze101 look forward to more stories comming your way and no joke

whats funny is that i wrote this but i can't get logged on cause i forgot my password and switched emails...so sorry i can't finish it, i feel it was badley written anyways cause is just wanted to get it over with...hopefully one day ill be able to log back on and continue \(o)/

Granite is dead!

Lovin' this! Please please update soon!

Really good please do that 5th chapter very soon! want to know what happens!

Great story! I can't beleive Granite is back!I can't wait to read more. Please update!

Could you include some Padra/Arran? I love that pairing!

Keep up the great work.

i love this! when are you making the fourth chapeter! i really want to know what happens

Granite! He's worse than half the main characters I've read about when it comes to refusing to stay dead! How many times will they have to get rid of him! Great chapter. Evil cliffhanger. Update soon.

-Dyslexic Nerd

Ooooo, Granite! I never liked him. I wonder what he wants with Urchin... other than pay back for ruining his life... twice.

Ohhhhh!

This is great!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a really well written so far. I like that Fingal is imitating Padra. I wonder what the stars will bring? Update soon!

-Dyslexic Nerd

Brilliant chapter Molly! I like Urchin's punishment method though I feel sorry for Ace and Crispin :D

Eagerly awaiting the next part now!

Sounds like a great fanfic Mollymaze, I like the idea of one of Urchin's children being named after Crispin. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (Pleeeeease don't keep me waiting tooo long ;D )