 IGOTEAMEDWARD 2/5/11 . chapter 2Great chapter! :) |
 tecumseh dean 1/17/11 . chapter 2 awwwwww i REALLY liked this! very well written! well done! |
 anon 1/17/11 . chapter 2 I think you should write more, I like this story. |
 sofiya 1/16/11 . chapter 2 Nice read. You could prob extend it a chapter or two if you wanted. It does seem to end a tad abruptly... but I like my happily ever afters coming quickly sometimes. :) |
 francaise3 1/16/11 . chapter 2Loved it! Would love also to read how it develops further! |
 BlueMizuki 1/14/11 . chapter 1Looking forward to more. |
 IGOTEAMEDWARD 1/9/11 . chapter 1Great start! I like
the way they banter. :) |