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Guest 5/9/13 . chapter 3 i have never fainted but I think I've come close. i get dizzy and i black out and i have to lean against something or i fall down |
cajunghost 6/10/12 . chapter 18I love this story. And you suck big for leaving it hanging like this. |
MC-GAR-IL 5/31/12 . chapter 18Finally caught up but where to start, a swirl of emotion inside me so many of them dark and angsty so let's start with something light. Boobs. Man their a bitch always in your face and making things hard, you know how hard it is to play guitar or bass with your boobs in the way. Stupid giant obstacles. God I love angst and drama but sometimes I get too wrapped up in it. I thought that there'd be the same amount of drama as your last story but this is a whole new level. It was bad enough that they kept getting interrupted when they wanted to kiss but this... Did I mention how many different torture scenarios I thought up for Carly's dad. Let me tell you it'a a lot, guess my sadistic side comes in handy. At first I thought you wrote machine gun instead of hand gun. I don't know where my mind was at the moment. Why did Spence call Sir why? When Sam went missing I kept thinking of all the things that could have happened to her. And man was Melanie pissed the fuck off. Why is Sir such a damn prick? She gets out of the hospital for her heart trouble and then she gets shot, fan-fucking-tastic. I'm thinking a dungeon setting with him chained to the wall and my personal favorite pick of torture devices. How could Spencer miss it it was right in front of his damn face. I mean come on you can't not see it. Even Freddie saw it and supported them. You ever see Law Abiding Citizen, I would use that drug they had so he would stay awake not pass out from pain and still be able to feel everything. You noticed they never really had any 'down' time they just kept going from one problem to the next, just drama drama drama. Even in the filler chapters. First just like in LAC I would cut off his eyelids so he can't shut his eyes and see everything I'm doing to him. I've never been a Creddie shipper, even before I found my love for CAM I always wanted Freddie to ether be with Melenie or Wendy. I don't why Creddie just never sat well with me. First I would start with a knife and hot wax at the same time if you catch my drift. I love this story so much just for the drama, there's something so simple butt addicting about your writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. The Next thing I would pull out is Nails a hammer and salt. I hope Sam makes it I think they deserve a happy ending, but if she didn't that would fulfil my love for angst. Then one of those little saws used for amputation, first his fingers then his hand. I hope you update soon can't wait until to see what's coming next and how and if Carly explains to Sam or will she self-implode first? After that pull out my wires and hook it up to my light source and put some electricity in him, repeat these steps for as many hours as possible. MC over and out (Sir your one dead S.O.B., and maybe an 'unfortunate accident' during a 'circumcision' :]) |
8D SerenityCrystal Tear 83 5/4/12 . chapter 18Love this story so much! First it went from hilarious with all the perviness, and then serious when when Carly and Spenser's father came home, and then just plain shocking with this last chapter! I have just got to see (correction: read) what happens next! Please update, I love this fic! |
ForbiddenDarkSoul 12/21/11 . chapter 18Hey! im new to your story, but I Totally licked it! I hope you update fast, it's a really good story and it's cool you support Cam :D |
SeddieLove4Ever 11/13/11 . chapter 18Good story, it has a lot of drama. I hope 'Sir' never get outta jail. Bastard.. ANyway, I really like the story and I hope you upload soon! :) |
Im Jus A Teenage Dirtbag Baby 9/27/11 . chapter 18I absolutely completely and utterly adore this story ! Please update soon :D the world needs more Cam lovin' |
JPElles 9/11/11 . chapter 18Very depressing. Gets any more depressing not sure if I can keep reading. as toung as sam is if has heart that shes as good as dead anyway. Even eating right shes got 10-15 years if its so serious already. Misdignosis, or allergy, clogged artery that needs surgery. Not sure what could give this story a happy ending at this point. Hope you dont kill everyone though. |
Guest 9/9/11 . chapter 3 When I was younger I fainted off the risers at school. It did feel funny. |
Anonymous123 8/15/11 . chapter 18 Enough darkness were need sam to live andbstuff and whatsoever up with th no sex seriously dude but anyway if been fine till carly dumped sam but still put in some light and sex where is it bring it into the picture |
Anonymous123 8/15/11 . chapter 18 Enough darkness were need sam to live andbstuff and whatsoever up with th no sex seriously dude but anyway if been fine till carly dumped sam but still put in some light and sex where is it bring it into the picture |
Ch3r 5/30/11 . chapter 18iOMG. OMG! Loving it. Hurry, I want more. I'm waiting for the sexy times between Carls and Sam! Hurry, happy ending! |
hakase 5/9/11 . chapter 18 great one cuould you pls keep updating this asap we really want to know what will hapen from now on please update att hakase |
iTyncWithReality 5/4/11 . chapter 18Darn it. I just started this story and I broke my rule of not reading unless they're complete. This is what I get for it. Now I'm all caught up and hooked and THERE IS NO NEXT BUTTON! *sigh* I guess i'll just have to deal and wait for it, but please do not abandon. i need the closer. obiously i think this is a great story. i really like this second person pov that is not just limited to C adn S. Maybe something from Sir? probably too late though. Gosh im worked up: what's up w/ C? How is S? is Sir gone? Freddie adn Mel(not neccesary but cool little side thing)? Man i need more patience. Keep it up anyway youre doin great! Thank you for prime entertainment. (huh, i noticed how my grammer gradually degraded as the review progressed. how amusing.) |
bandgrad2008 5/2/11 . chapter 18I just gotta say, I haven't been able to stop reading this once I started, otherwise I would have reviewed every chapter. This is insane, one of the best fanfics I've read, and I totally wasn't expecting Carly to admit that she loved Sam in front of her father and all the fans. Can't wait to read the next chapter! |