i love it

I think this "idea" of Logan's is going to prove quite terrifying for the pack...lots of little Logans? Ack!

If you could continue this to show Logan's views on his previous "pack," then we could get some interesting snark on Team X, Wade Wilson, Sabertooth, etc.

That ending had me laughing hysterically for at least five minutes!

hehe that was cute! I like the ending!

Very nice, i too view my friends as a sort of pack :) i think you displayed Logan's thoughts quite well :)

Ha, that was funny, very cute! I liked that, showed a compassionate side to Logan. Yet you didn't neglect his animal side at all, you've done it so much better. Peole always think he has to be mean and vicious or even ignorant, this shows a better and more rational aspect to his nature. Greatly enjoyed the read, thank you very much!

Hmm. A lovely idea, but Logan seems quite out of character in patches. The grammar is shaky but you did say English was not your first language - have you considered using a beta-reader?

Also, people are complaining that you've missed Storm out - f I'm right in thinking that she is the 'Ro Logan refers to, perhaps you should lengthen the name so it's clearer?

It is a fantastic idea, though. With a little work, and a devoted beta-reader, you could have some very, very good stuff.

hee hee hee, fun

Cute. I really liked it, and your English is fine. Keep it up.

What about Storm! :(

Very nice!

This is probably the only one of your fic's that I have noticed any mistakes in. It is quite a good story, but the grammer is just awful...I know you said to forgive your mistakes, and I do, because the fic is awesome, but if you want someone to help fix them, i'd be willing. Blessed be.

P.S. GREAT fic.

more give me more

Hehehe...good one.. I like this story...

Would you be writing more of this storyline or just ending it as a one-shot?

Good work...

Great story! I'd luv a scott/ro fic :)