Awesome!

Very lovely!

Wow! That was very sweet. Congrats!

Lovely 3

What a beautiful finish to that scene!

Sigh... if only they had the sense to finish it like this...
Your style is wonderful and suits the book/show very well, and your punctuation, grammar and all that jazz are also lovely, well done.
I particularly loved the little moments of either desperation, confusion or other sort of... 'Extreme' emotions (in My Thornton's case, they're not seen readily) and these in small amounts sprinkled through the shot were incredibly amusing. The emotion he rarely showed you portrayed wonderfully.
I also liked the talk of what is proper, or at least in Margaret's head, it suited the character perfectly.
I did love it, all of it, the thing as a whole, mind you. It had me smiling and for that I am grateful.
Very Sincerely Yours,

Oh my. This is perfect. So unbelieveably, incredibly perfect. :')

Very nice ending; excellent reference to "a sunny Sunday morning". :)

Lovely OS. I loved it

Just, yay!

That was cute a bit out off character at times (compared to the show) but that's just me. Loved the story because i like knowing what could possibly happen right after series/movies like that end

Cute! The end with her just looking out the window sort of falls flat. This is how the story SHOULD have ended.

Wonderful )

I really appreciate the way you brought everything full circle and included things from the movie/book plot like the sunny Sunday wedding. I loved the way your writing flowed, your sentence structure (nicely poetic), and am not all together convinced you're not some covert published Aussie author ;)

Only gripes: I know back in those times, propriety was everything, but when you repeated that it was wrong to be so close, ect a number of times throughout this short piece, I didn't like that. Also, I feel Margaret and John kissed a bit too much. Coming off of the last scene from the movie, they'd already shared 2 of the most beautiful, passionate kisses I've seen in a while- one meaningful one after she told him she loved him would have read better (for me). Or maybe throwing in an intimate touch or gesture like the hand squeeze may have worked better, if not just as well.

Overall, it was wonderful, and fans of the mini series will thank you for this wonderful piece of fan fic 3 Kudos, and keep up the great work!

Have nothing to say. Just emotions. Well, in a writing form it'll be something like WHOOAAAHAHAHA WHOOOOOOHOOO! Well, gorgeous I mean))

Great job, going back to the beginning where she talked about her ideal wedding. Thanks for sharing!