I have to say, it's TRULY a PITY that you can write over 100k words of utter "NONSENSE" but can't write A REAL STORY!

I've ALWAYS wanted to say something yrs ago but just never bothered too, but I just CAN'T GET over it now that it's "done"..

I guess when it's NOT a REAL story, then any kinda crap can be written and length doesn't matter.

P.S. I took on glance at the very begin and can't stomach this so called 'story'..Your format is atrocious.

Love it! Esp. the part about Jack answering Chloe's call and then rolling over to see her next to him hanging up the phone. Classic!

YAY! Last but wonderful chapter is up! I was actallu surprised that you put me in the story but it was pretty funny...the dark side of me lol. I also liked the twists in the chapter. It reminded of the movie "Inception" where they were battling in their dreams and I found that to be pretty funny. Terri coming back and being evil...whoa-ho-hooo pretty clever also Baby Bop stealing Logan's cookies...looks like they found out who it finally was.

Good job with this story :)

Hey, you finally updated. Good to see you back here and the interesting, but yet hilarious chapter in this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Okay, just a few things

1) Edgar being Heath and Saddam being a robot was the most surprising part. Loved it!

2) The Tom and Jerry reference was so funny also.

3) I was actually surprised when you wrote the Jack looked under the blanket and actually saw KIM KARDASHIAN! I wasm laughing so hard on that part.

4) I love the side notes that you put with the editor although he is pretty mean. You should kill him at the end :)

5) This whole fanfiction is funny and priceless. I love it

UPDATE SOON!

Actually, that twist with Edgar and Audrey was very surprising but also pleasant. Cannot wait to read the net chapter.

Great. I love it!

Yo, I have to agree with a editor. You can't leave it at a cliffhanger like that, so ya'll better update soon :)

Still funny, and as I said it before, the Saddam and Heath moments are funny, but there is something that I don't understand, like Heath not saying one word throughtout the whole story, is he deaf or something?

Anyways update soon :)

WOW! 18 chapters and still funny. UPDATE!

Pretty good. The Saddam and Heath moments are priceless! Update soon

Ha, ha very funny :)

Love it! Especially the random scenes too. The one with Adam Lambert and Charlie Sheen was hilarious! XD

Nice

Nice and still funny.

LOL AGAIN! And nice cliffhanger by the way. I wonde what the next tortourous movie is next for Kim?

UPDATE ASAP! :)