Write moreee!

Please, continue this. I'd like to see where it goes.

So? Are you going to continue? Cuz I like

I hope you plan on updating this sometime soon! I absolutely loved Melinda One versus Melinda Two. More please!

I always loved them together. You are a great writer. I especially loved the details.

I like the way you write, but this chapter needs to be a bit longer, yes?

OMG again so much like the book! Please continue you are really great!

I-is this a new chapter I see? :D amaizing, once again! Didn't see that coming :p I had honestly thought it was a one-shot, but are you actually going to make this an actual story? You should because, well, it's fucking amaizing :)

Ok i got the book a lond time ago but i just started today (and i finished it) this is kind of how i imangened it coming out please continue!

U got to finish this! After reading that first chapter I got to read a second! Please update soon!

aww this story made me smile - you portray Mels characer really good!

im keeping my fingers crossed that add another chapter to this because its awesome! :DD

This was wonderful! I love her emotion. Great job!

I really liked this! You got Mel's character really well. There's that almost dark sense of humor in your writing that matches her. I like the format you used as well, it reminds me of the book. Keep going!

keep going! this is super interesting, I'm glad there's something going on with those two characters. :D

awwwhhhh I REALLY wanted there to be a conclusion to the story where these two obvious lovebirds get together! :D thanks for posting this! Loved! And the writing style is very close to the book's writing style so you get extra bonus points on the awesome scale from me for that! :D Anyways, I love this! Favorited!