This brief, yet nominal dialogue between Assumpta and Peter is great. I t manages to create a much more satisfying conclusion to this dramatic scene.

Yea! I always hated how he said "I'm a priest" since he's the one who started the thing in the car. Nice change, very sweet!

I can see it happen the way you have written it and you did such a good job with it. Please continue...can't wait but must.

What a nice surprise to find this after 3 hours of homework!

It was a lovely read! I had to do my own share of wiping my eyes, and I'm not embarrassed to admit it :)

Excellent - that should have been *exactly* what happened!

Great story. So glad to see you take that episode in this direction. Looking forward to more.

Lovely touch to this episode! How delightful that you plan to add to this story - quite looking forward to all your work!