"Upon not finding him there, Alec proceeded to train the gun on Max, figuring he might as well kill someone."

Is that a joke? Alec would never just up and decide to kill someone for the heck of it. Not only that, but how did Max 'swiftly [kick] his ** and [haul] it to the nearest police station'? He's got 10 years of training on her. Seriously, why can't anyone write a M/L story and keep Alec in character? I mean, is it that hard to accept that just because someone isn't Logan that they can actually have characterization? Honestly, I couldn’t even read past that sentence. Your handling of Alec was just too dreadful, unrealistic and immature to ignore.

Hey,
I really love your story. I've been reading some angst and sad stories about Max and Logan that I was feeling depressed. When I've read your happy ending I feel really better. Congratulations.

yay! they shoulda had that in season two but nooooo, they have to throw a ** virus in the mix.. i love this! this is so good; i love the description :) keep writing

This is the third time I#ve read it in the last few weeks and it still has leaves me all warm and emotional. This time i just ×had× to review - it's so good it hurts.

Oh that was such a beautiful story.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

*sniff sniff* Beautiful!

This is so beautiful, I absolutely love it! Please say you're going to continue!

awwwww too sweet!!! I loved it!!!!

Yay! Queen Gwen is back! I'm so glad to read another of your fics. I love how you dealt with Alec! That was awesome. If you ask me, that's what they should have done with him on the show. He's starting to bore me.
And it is absolutely wonderful to read some M/L shippiness again. Lord knows we get little enough of it on the show.
Keep writing! I'd love another installment of Second Sight as well, whenever you have time.

Wow, cool story. Just what we need with the virus, some shipperness. You're an great writer. And, hey, everyone suffers writer blocks (Points at herself) like I'm doing right now.

*sigh* That's just what I needed, thank you :)

Great story. Made my heart glad M/L so belong to each other. I am so glad you muse has returned. I have been waiting for a while for you to write again. I hope you write more and soon.

Awwww. Very creative idea, Logan running away rather than staying in Seattle. Love the way you took the BT speech and put it here in a much more hopeful setting. The cabin is a perfect place for their reunion. Sweet.

wow! that was really really really really really really really good! that is exactly how it should have happened!