Aww! The feels, the feels. This was great.. Well written, good length and you are totally right about jack and the doctor. They are so inevitable! I liked how this was romance without being mushy and gross lol so yeah, good job!
Doctor&Jack forever!

I like, I mean, it was definitely good, cute really.

Good job :D

-Alex-

That was pretty good. I liked the ending! :) But, to me, the characters seemed to bounce about a bit and you described them by their hair colour a lot, which meant I had to pay close attention to what you were actually saying. Other than that, I really enjoyed it - great first fic! xx

Oho what a convincing Jack Harkness ;)