Every story I read sasuke rejects working together but they still pass, sounds like authors are smoking too much toxic weeds instead of using their own head. Somebody should write a FAILED story, if they don't work together then FAILED THEM. Easy no? or have every writer lost their brains?

Thanks for completely fucking the story up with this half demon and immortal bullshit.

oh come on, he kills no problem and blushes on sex?

I agree that the third should have been the one but even though it was Kakashi what makes it worst was they waited until shippuden to actually tell Naruto the seventeenth how often he spammed that Justus. Honestly that is the real crime was waiting so late to tell him and not so much the who.

there are not only the gamabunta's scene from the sealed kunai... there are many other scenes u have taken from other fanfic, the least u coul do it give them the credit for the ideas that u took from them & modified to u benefit...
coz i can definately name around 3-4 fanfics these scenes r taken from, and that's only in this chapter alone... and the scenes were hardly changed... well maybe not noticable to most those who havent read them
just telling to mention those fics and authors u've taken those scenes from...else it's rip-off..
as much as i like the idea of awesome/cool naruto here... these few things r turning me off (i'll still read and see till the latest chapter, but if it get's too much... )
- (hoping it better not be naruto x kyuubi paring, dislike it; not only it's cliche it's weird; p.s. i prefer canonical paring but that's until very late, else no paring, maybe just dropping hints n tid-bit)
-didn't like naruto x (but it's over, anyway not like it's going to matter much; though it might have been kinda cool with both of them -zabuza & haku(boy, the canonical) alive n teaming with mei later maybe...whatever, just a suggestion)
-do not like naruto x harem (like i said i prefer canonical paring else none, even if canonical not the actual canon hinata -too freaking weak to do anything, but even then she was there when other females his age weren't & liked him, which is a bonus in my book- but damn, y is she made so weak . for that matter i hate how they made the canon naruto too...throwing/showing so much potential n dropping hints but using none and freaking made him look like and loudmouth idiot, not faring much better in the latest chapter either, not by much)
-don't like naruto with temari or yugito or tenten...(reasons- above)
-btw the healing ability is uzumaki clans, not kurama a.k.a kyuubi's, he might have just sped up the regen sometimes near life-death situations
-though i do like few new ideas, like the double combination seal put on sasuke's curse seal... n maybe few...but frankly not much impressed with this fic, i though it had potential so i continued thus far maybe i'll i'll read few more to see what happens, but u better see that u mention the scenes u take from other fics, it's obvious when u look to find...
few more stuff i'll mention later, adios

p.s. those scenes r not from the omakes btw, since u mentioned those

How come Naruto was so freaked out wen toki wanted t thank him?
Nice chap hope u update soon ;)

I will admit i am kinda unsatisfied with the whole immortal thing but hey this is your story. If you really wanted you could turn yugito or fu into a half demon too using their bijuu but that would only make sense if you really wanted to give Naruto a longterm lover or wife

another good solid chapter, also I agree on just starting the chunin exams, can't wait to see how things turn out. Also man I'm super excited for when you finally let on as to who naruto is gonna fall for (after haku of course)

damn due, this chapter was great solely because of the heartrending emotion you managed to capture, great job it caught me completely by surprise which is nice for a change.

Me again, just wanted to say I have read fics/the manga/ and the anime all covering this arc and I can't put my finger on it but your take on it is easily one of my favorites so far

I like how you're handling Sasuke so far, he's still arrogant because that's just how he is but there isn't just mindless bashing. sometimes the bashing can distract from the fic and I'm just glad you've avoided it

Just wanted to say I like how you're making Naruto noticeably stronger without making it ridiculous like other fics . In my opinion Naruto only enters that level of skill after the time skip and he gets sage mode/ninetails chakra mode

I have to say I'm diggin the boujutsu, he could get the hokage to give him some tips or scrolls since he is a master with Enma

it seems to me like you are potentially setting up naruto and Anko, if so i approve lol no that it matters, can't wait to read more of your work!

LYNCH THE MOTHERFUCKER