|Reviews for Encounter|
| Esprit D'escalier 10/13/11 . chapter 2
Hm, interesting so far. Hasn't been updated in a while though, are you planning to continue?
| Esprit D'escalier 10/13/11 . chapter 1
Wait, what just happened there? Why would she do that?
Anyway, took me forever to figure out the boy and the mottarad were Kino and Hermes. Derp.
| Behind The Screen It Falls 4/2/11 . chapter 2
By gosh, this is great! I love seeing things through the magical fantasies of Kino no Tabi and this fanfiction seems so close to the real anime!
Keep it up!
| carmensakura07 2/14/11 . chapter 1
| The Blue Footed Booby 1/10/11 . chapter 1
What an unusual take on the character! It's always interesting to see a familiar character through unfamiliar eyes; they always see new things.
I would suggest filling in the context though. We know so little about our POV character's past, why he traveled, how he was injured, how he knew Kino or someone very like Kino, or the motives behind Kino's actions. Of course an author may choose to leave some things hinted at or ambiguous.
Your version of Hermes is charming... I forget how annoying he can be sometimes.