Please update soon?

awesome chapter! and i was thinking, since her mom is Artemis, and Artemis's dad was Zeus, then isnt Zeus kinda her grandpa? xD

good start! excpet for the fact that the goddess Artemis was given the gift of immortal virginity, she was the only god to not have kids.. so that part is screwed up, but besides that.. awesome!

you really need to work on your chapter lengths... and the formatting of quotes and sentences... but fairly good so far. akthough im just warning here, but all three of your chapters could be easily converted into one...

hey loving your story :)

please update soon x

no offence but Artemis is a virgin Goddess...just thought I'd let yuh know...(:

good super short a few grammar errors but still good _ Please make the next on longer *on knees*

Good so far. It's really interesting. It needs to be longer though. I can't wait for the next chapter though.

I like it. Only 3 paragraphs and already interested, you my friend got a story on your hands. Cant wait for the next chap, and hopefully it will be a little longer then the last one. By the way i havnt read your other stories nor do i know your writing style yet, but ive read alot of fanfiction (need to get a life and do my homework) and ive noticed the more details and character thoughts, the longer the chapter is, and catches peoples attention(my opinion which you can completely ignore because ill still end up reading your story anyways)

Love,

Alex (girl not guy)

this seems intresting, but maybe a longer chapter next time :)

UPDATE SOONXD