(sniffles)

This story was so sweet I started crying, you did a really great job of capturing the emotions in the fic!

I can't... I can't really breathe right now... give my burning throat a second.

This was heart-wrenching. Poor Harry. Poor Mrs. Diggory. Poor Remus. Poor Cedric.

Poor e'rybody!

No, seriously, you've really got a good handle on emotions.

A really good handle.

The only error I found was when you didn't capitilize Harry.

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This was so beautiful... Thought it was brilliant, I shed a tear or two myself...

That was such a touching story! I was actually crying! (Not an easy feat btw). It was really unexpected that Cedric's mother was comforting him but at the same time, it fits. The conversation between them was wonderfully written! the emotions were displayed perfectly. It was really nice to read! Excellent job! :)

Analie

Very sweet and very emotional. Good job!

That was a wonderfully told story. I have no more to say aprt from "Thank you".

Very good, very insightful. Keep writing

Oh...that's so beautifully sad! Very well done, poor Mrs Diggory :(

A couple of things I'd just point out:

saying Harry 'owed Cedric big-time' was a bit of an off-putter, it sort of killed the intensity of the moment, even just saying he 'owed Cedric so much' would have maybe been more fitting.

Also at a funeral you say the gathering afterwards is a 'wake', a 'reception' is for weddings, which are quite different.

Aside from that, however, this was perfect. Very well done for writing it, Harry's guilt was so well played, as was Mrs Diggory's sense of love and understanding and affection.

Brilliant all round,

Love AJLL x

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri