|Reviews for Camp Drama World of Fantasies|
| supertrip 1/29/12 . chapter 21
I laughed to tears when the contestants quoted "Thriller" by Michael Jackson.
| fighterofflames 5/21/11 . chapter 11
I just chose a random chapter to type this.
You should bring back the KND contestants back for the next season. I would like to see Number 4 get some things thrown in his face.
| fighterofflames 4/30/11 . chapter 49
I have to say this was great.
Even though my favorite character lost in the final five.
I can't wait till the next season.
| NashWalker 4/30/11 . chapter 49
Nice Work on the finale. So when's Season 4's premiere?
And about the vampire Edmund, you shouldn't introduce him until the second-to-last or third-to-last Aftermath of Season 4. He starts causing trouble for Bart and Lisa during Season 5 which leads to taking time off their Aftermath jobs (thanks to their parents) halfway through the season. They return in the season finale to announce their official departure from the show. Everyone is heartbroken by this and share a group hug with them and wish them well.
| NashWalker 4/30/11 . chapter 48
Sorry for the late review, can't wait for the finale and hopefully, the alternate ending I suggested.
Oh and do you have a premiere date for Season 4?
| NashWalker 4/26/11 . chapter 47
Impressive, though I wish you could've made an actually scene of Riley and Isabella teaming up, like Gwen and Owen did. I also wish you could've used a bucket of pink hair dye instead of a spray can and covered Draco in pink from head to toe. And made a scene similar to Heather's response to her defeat in TDI.
So next is the final aftermath, and after that is the final challenge where Riley wins, and after that the brief alternate ending where Isabella wins.
For the final challenge it should be a race around the island. The final two choose two losers and one alumni member to help them.
Riley chooses Huey, Jazmine, and Duncan, Isabella chooses Phineas, Ferb, and Sierra. Isabella says she chooses Sierra because while she doesn't approve of her methods to get Cody's attention, she does like her determination and refusal to give up.
Throughout the challenge, Draco and his allies continuously attack Riley and Isabella and their helpers to obliterate them and take the prize for themselves. But, thanks to Riley's street smarts and Isabella's nimble skill, they ultimately fail and wind up crashing near the finish line located on a mountain top.
When Riley wins, Draco finally loses his temper and gets into a physical tussle with Riley. Draco then pulls his wand out and shoots off several spells, which damage a nearby cliff. Riley knocks Draco of the cliff, but not before one last spell destroys the treasure. Draco bounces all the way down to the bottom of the mountain, and the damaged cliff gives way, causing a rock slide and everyone runs down the mountain, and tramples over Draco who is then crushed under the rocks (but survives and is put in a full body cast). Chris then signs off the season.
In the alternate ending, Draco tries to attack Isabella but Phineas pushes her out the way, causing him to struggle w/ Draco instead and the rest of the ending goes as the same as the official one.
| NashWalker 4/24/11 . chapter 46
Well that was an explosive chapter. Can't wait to see Draco's long-awaited downfall in the game and the last Aftermath after it. Next chap, Trent does the commentary due to Chris still cryng over the lost of the train.
And I know I've said this lots of times, but all of the eliminated contestants, and some of their family members, plus the TDI alumni, the Aftermath hosts, and even some of the billionaire donators should come to Wawanakwa to watch it. When Riley and Isabella are introduced by Chris, everyone cheers and praise them. But Draco is booed and jeered by everybody (except his helpers and many of the donators).
And for the final aftermath, everyone throws a big party to celebrate the coming end of the season, Draco's elimination, and Riley and Isabella making the final two. Their is plenty of singing and dancing. Plus, we also get another sneak peek at Season 4.
At the end, Draco returns to the island meets with Blaineley, Alejandro, Courtney, Heather, and Zurg. They then begin to come up with a plan to take the prize money by force.
| NashWalker 4/22/11 . chapter 45
Nice work as usual.
Now for the next challenge, it should involve explosives. Fanny wins invincibility and teams up with Riley and Isabella to vote Draco out at last. However, just before Chris can declare Draco eliminated, a hand grenade flies out of nowhere into the middle of the ceremony. Fanny quickly grabs it and throws it away. Unfortunately, it lands in the train, which in moments is demolished in a massive explosion (after everyone manage to evacuate of course). Fanny is caught in the middle and injured in the blast, and the other contestants and the alumni rush to her aid. Angered at the loss of his beloved train and everything in it, Chris angrily kicks Fanny out of the competition, sparing Draco from elimination. Fanny, despite her injuries, is shot out of the Cannon of Shame, the only part of the train still intact.
Just before Chris signs off the show in tears, Riley and Isabella discover that Draco had anticipated Fanny breaking their pact, and had his alumni allies set everything up. This motivates both of them to make sure Draco doesn't make it to the final two.
And for the final challenge, the two finalists get to choose two losing contestants and an alumni member to assist them. Riley chooses Huey, Jazmine, and Duncan, while Isabella chooses Phineas, Ferb, and Sierra.
| NashWalker 4/20/11 . chapter 44
Pretty early for an update, but I like it.
Oh and for the final three episode, Trent should do the opening commentary since Chris is still upset over the loss of the train, which was indadvertedly caused by Fanny thanks to Draco's allies.
And just for a few reminders:
For the challenge, it's the Spin the Bottle challenge from season 1 of Total Drama, the challenge that brought Heather down in TDI. The rules are same as in Total Drama Island; do dare yourself to get a freebie, or pass it to somebody else. Freebies can beused to block passed-on dares. The one who chickens out is automatically eliminated.
Also, all of the eliminated contestants, and some of their family members, plus the TDI alumni, the Aftermath hosts, and even some of the billionaire donators come to Wawanakwa to watch it. When Riley and Isabella are introduced by Chris, everyone cheers and praise them. But Draco is booed and jeered by everybody (except his helpers and many of the donators).
And here are the dares I managed to come up with. You can add your own if u like:
Flapjack: Lick a mold-covered lolipop (Isabella)
Cleveland Jr.: Play catch with a beehive (Riley)
Karin: Jump rope using rattlesnakes (Draco)
Phineas: Bungee jump of highest cliff on island (Riley)
Jimmy: Diffuse a time stinkbomb (Isabella)
Johnny: Dive into pool of hotsauce (Riley)
Fanny: French-kiss a dead fish (Draco)
Huey: Hand-feed raw meat to sharks (Isabella)
Danielle: Eat five Madagascar hissing Cockroaches (Draco)
Cindy: Walk a tightrope over a vat of hot boiling water. (Draco blocks w/ only freebie)
Gaz: Give a wolverine a haircut. (Riley)
Tony: Slap yourself silly. (Isabella)
Marc: Eat Shrek's cooking until you puke. (Draco)
Abigail: Moonwalk non-stop for 15 minutes. (Riley)
Wally: Give Chef an atomic wedgie. (Riley)
These below are the dares that Draco is forced to endure after Riley and Isabella team-up against him before the last one gets him eliminated
Timmy: Eat 4 pounds of smelly Gorganzolla cheese.
Manny: Pull a tiger's tail.
Hiro: Have your mouth stuffed to the brink with marshmallows.
Carl: Kiss a smelly underwear puppet
Kuki: Dance ballet while wearing a tutu.
Marceline: Drink cow blood.
Jazmine: Have your hair dyed pink by Chef. (Draco, who despises and has somewhat a fear of pink, panicks at last second and knocks the bucket of pink hair dye into the air, and it lands on him covering his hair and the rest of him in pink dye, causing his elimination, Heather-style)
After which Draco tries to argue that his elimination was unfair, but Chris just says to him, you lose, they win, just like with Heather. Nearly everyone then celebrate Draco's long-awaited downfall and cheer for Riley and Isabella's victory.
And for the final aftermath, everyone throws a big party to celebrate the coming end of the season, Draco's elimination, and Riley and Isabella making the final two. Their is plenty of singing and dancing. They also get another sneak peek at Season 4.
But Draco isn't finished and, along with his friends begins plotting his most evil scheme yet...
| NashWalker 4/18/11 . chapter 43
Nice, but I think you're kinda moving the Hiro-Danielle relationship a little too fast with the constant making-out. They are only 12 and 13 after all.
Next chapter should be a singing contest, Draco sabotoges Johnny's number which leads to him being instantly eliminated w/out a campfire ceremony.
Riley: "Get Back" by Ludacris
Draco: "You're Going Down" by Sick Puppies
Danielle: "A Thousand Miles" by Vanessa Carlton (Wins)
Isabella: "Genie in a Bottle" by Christina Auguilara
Fanny: "Die Another Day" by Madonna
Johnny: "We Will Rock You" by Queen (sabotoged by Draco)
The challenge judges are Trent, Leshawna, and Noah
| NashWalker 4/10/11 . chapter 39
Nice work. Next chapter, Draco convinces the other contestants except Danielle, Hiro, and Isabella to vote off Phineas, due to his popularity.
Then, in the chapter after that, he sabotoges Danielle, and tricks Hiro into quitting the competition, to spare her from elimination (since Danielle is gonna be in the final five).
| NashWalker 4/6/11 . chapter 37
So DJ's trying to gather up anti. He should get Duncan, Gwen, Trent, Owen, Lindsay, and Justin to combat Draco and his allies, as well as the former team leaders. Justin and Lindsay should also discover who's been helping Draco from the inside, but not get caught in the act.
And as for Hiro's second elimination (which shouldn't occur until after Mandy, Cindy and Phineas have been picked off), Hiro and Danielle should share another romantic moment and Heather spies on them and reports back to Draco, who engineers Hiro's endgame again.
| NashWalker 3/31/11 . chapter 34
Nice work. Next chapter, you should have Hiro and Danielle get caught up in a romantic moment and kiss again. And Isabella tries to get close to Phineas again.
And Draco's next scheme gets Ilana or Marceline eliminated at last.
| NashWalker 3/25/11 . chapter 31
Ferb. Oh boy Phineas is gonna be really unhappy about this.
Next chap You should have Draco start to use his manipulations to pick off the remaining ex-members of Team Newbie until Fanny is left.
| NashWalker 3/23/11 . chapter 30
Nice work with the merge, now that the teams have been dissolved, you should have Draco keep a low profile, and have him start ridding himself of the competition, all the while dodging elimination. He should pick off the ex-members of Team Newbie one by one up until Fanny is left before turning against his own former teammates until Johnny is left.
Meanwhile, Riley forms an alliance with Huey and many of the other competitors to try to get rid of Draco.
Oh and Huey should stay in the game until the first episode of the Camp Wawanakwa saga. and speaking of which, you should have a fighting tournament, and have him pitted against Cindy since they're both big time martial arts fighters. Their match ends in a draw as a result, and they both bring someone to first class with them; Cindy brings Jimmy and Huey brings Jazmine.
Oh and I see you fixed that error finally. Congrats.