|Reviews for 13 Steps|
| anonymousreader 5/11/13 . chapter 13
I really love how the story goes
I just don't understand the ending, kinda..
I love Margaret here, heheh..
I love how you describe(?) the characters, make me feel they're real :'D
and make me feel that I'm just a weirdo watching at them, lol.
| darrah-toons 4/20/13 . chapter 13
I thought this was going to take a turn for the worse and tears were burning in my eyes, but I was happy to see how it ended and absolutely loved how it all turned out. This was a great story and I was happy to read from begging to end. You did great on this.
| Vianerd 3/12/13 . chapter 13
This was beautiful. It made me cry about three times - but that's a good thing! The way you've written the characters is unique, in-character and believable, and I found myself sympathizing with everyone. I'm glad I took the time to read the whole story - definitely a choice I did not regret!
| yunor 3/10/13 . chapter 13
This story was really epic and tear-jerking. But throught the story i was hoping that Mordecai would have the courage to admit it to himself. the ending really let me down, i mean the whole story was building up this gut-wrenching suspense and when he decides to leave and Mordecai just might confess, you skip six months and then they act like total strangers again... i was really hoping for an epic end to an epic story :'(
| RegularShowLuvr 9/29/12 . chapter 13
I have to say that, that was a great story it was very confrontational and deep, I loved how you contradicted the charcaters thoughts with the characters conscience
But when I was reading it I found it hard to put mordecai and rigby's face on the characters, you kind of changed the characters alot, but I really liked the story
and you could have put a but more into the end, are mordecai and rigby back to bring best bro's instantly after not seeing each other for 6 months without any communication?
Well I guess time did heal all wounds
| Mr.GW 8/29/12 . chapter 1
HOLY SHIZ! :D I'm loving this and it's only The Beginning! I'm going to read it all but to let you know, this is Amazing and hooked me ;)
| DeepSeaFanglyFish 8/27/12 . chapter 11
Umm if there's someone reading this that isn't old enough to have seen Full House, I think we need to talk about what the rating "M" means
| DeepSeaFanglyFish 8/27/12 . chapter 2
I'm definitely sure that they've been drunk in episodes of the show before. hahaha. I mean, Mustache Cash Stash? Come on, haha
| derpina-x 6/28/12 . chapter 13
this whole story was amazing! :D
| Observant reader 4/9/12 . chapter 4
I really don't mind the direction your taking Margarete, this chapter was probably written before she was developed more. So your just adding details to a minor character.
| UnC0mM0n An4RcHy 2/13/12 . chapter 13
Oh my god, this was amazing. Probably one of the best stories in this fandom. I really was hoping they would end up together in the end, but I guess after everything that happened that wasn't really realistic. The way you did end it was beautiful, and I will definitely suggest this to other fans of this show :D
| Guest 2/2/12 . chapter 13
I'm not going to lie. I cried a lot while reading this and although I didn't get the ending I was expecting, this is so well written that I can't find anything in myself to complain about it. Bravo, mio amico. I wonder how Mordecai found Rigby, and I'm really hoping you make a sequel of this one day. I also think its adorable how you gave Margaret a personality, not just portrayed her as a slutty person. Amazing fanfic, and forever one of my favorites.
| Kidiu 1/13/12 . chapter 8
I particularly liked this chapter. I really appreciate that you gave Margaret some depth, and not as some mindless whore. I also really liked the mordy in this chapter.
| abbiisawsome 12/25/11 . chapter 13
aw i can't believe rigby left but then mordecai found him again
| abbiisawsome 12/24/11 . chapter 8
aw poor mordecai