Iv seen this FF 4 a while but wasnt really interested in it... But now im lik wow i luv this! U should totally make a sequel showing their relationship more! Ja'ne...

This chapter is kinda cute! -

'"What? How?" Sakuno asked and whispered something to Sakuno.'

I believe you have to put Tomoka's name before the word whispered 'cause it sounds like Sakuno is whispering to herself or another person named Sakuno.

Great story! I'm gonna go read the sequel now!

Kawaii ne I liked it! Going to see the sequel now ;)

Fadey

And they lived happily ever after. The End! Lmao! :D Good job with the story! And I happy they made up!

xialie nice may naalala ko sa chapter 10 mo Yikeee!

Dude I want to know who this Risha person is! *poke poke poke* Who is she? Lol, can't wait for the next chapter! (:

RYOMA IS SOOOO ROMANTIC! KYAA!

cool :) update.

Cute finally, Ryoma confessed to Sakuno! x3

Hooo...interesting. I'm curious what will Ryoma talk about?

Aw poor Ryoma! ;( I feel sorry for him. He can't tell her anything because she keeps running away. XD

I like it! (:

Uwaa...why cliffhanger again? And it's too short... x( I really like your story, i'm waiting for update! xD

Haha this is quite funny UPDATE QUICK YEA

Hahaha, more! i wanna see what happened next! update faster please... :D