Nicely written. I've always wanted to see what happened in this missing scene, and I think this sums it up well. :)

Your writing is brilliant, this feels just like a missing scene. Very sweet.

J/M fics are like oxygen to me. Unfortunately, there are so few knocking around, and even less which are actually decent. So for both points, I must commend you. This is lovely; it's one of my favourite episodes and my favourite J/M moments, and I'm glad to see someone else wanted more from that little character reveal.

If you have more, please post them! If you don't... please write them, then post them. I promise to review them all.

I'm getting sorely tempted to start posting my own stories, assuming I can ever finish them. :)

Absolutely loved it! Your writing was brilliant and true to character!

Yay! I loved this! Maddy putting on the brave face is something that anyone can relate to at one point or another, and I adored Jonathan's little proud moment when he realizes her faith in his abilities. I really didn't watch enough of this show, but these two were so awesome that it stuck with me anyhow. It's all very much them and their relationship of close-yet-far-apart. :D

This was very beautiful and true to both their characters! Wish you would write more JC stories - they are very hard to find.

Thanks a lot!