I really liked the story. You should continue writing.

the end was too abrupt! i was enjoying this immensely, nontheless it was great!

I love the ending you gave this story. It's going into my favorites. :)

Very sweet. I love how close they are getting and the pace you've set for the relationship. It's nice to see all the family involved in the process as well. Mrs. Bakshi is a riot. :D Jaya is not missing Balraj very much...

Loved this chapter as much as the introduction. I like the changes you made. Georgie and Jaya are great additions here.

Nice introductory chapter!

That is a very beautiful and moving story. I would love to read more of it. I constantly think about how sweet these two are together. I really love the way you worked Georgina into it.

Cute.

Awesome FF ! Really nicely done, especially the last chapter :)

Well I liked most of the changes you made, they were pretty good and kudos to working with the Georgina/Will relationship it was skimmed over in the movie.

However, I think that Darcy and Lalita were supposed to come to their understanding in Amritsar, not in London. Though that scene was very well done. I love this movie and wish there were more fanfics about it.

Lovely ending.

Thanks for sharing this. :)

Very sweet chapter. I liked how you handled the situation about the kiss. Darcy berating himself, apologizing and imagining the worse, was so "him" I'm glad they talked and reached that new understanding at the end.

Great chapter. The interactions between all characters felt very natural, from Lakhi, Jaya and Chandra to Lalita and Darcy. His nervousness throughout was endearing as were the subtle ways in which Lalita is falling for him too.

It's great to find a fic about this movie.3 I like the changes you've made here. Georgina's character had such a small part. It's nice to see how she's helping out big brother.

*reads on*

WONDERFUL! I just read the entire story and I loved it!