Not Kaen! Oh... I hope everything turns out okay. This chapter seemed just slightly dull compared to what has been happening, but this is also a transition chapter, so it makes sense. How lucky your friends are to beta-read this fic! I can't wait to see what happens next (although I should really study for my final and finish that essay - heck, START that essay).

What an amazing revelation! It wasn't Ryuuen who was broken; it was Sai! Outstanding! How many writing lessons have you taken? You're very professional.

The way everyone is acting... it's so real. It makes me wonder if perhaps you have seen this on TV, but it's written so much more realistically than TV.

Nice akugi! I didn't know Ryuuen was Jewish! X3 (Oy vey). Tee-hee

Finally! A chapter I have NOT reviewed!

Yes, after my sad addiction to , I have decided to return to And as I read new fics, and impatiently awaited their updates, I was reminded of the old fanfictions that I read.

Yours was top priority.

And as I read them again, I am now wiser to the art of writing. Two writing lessons, many summaries of writing books, and one completed novel (written by me) later, I am able to enjoy the stories, then break them down to their baser forms. (Damn, I sound like Doukun).

To put it simply, I am astounded at how amazing a writer you are. This story's prequel had me addicted to it, reading at least 5 chapters a day, whilst staying up until 2:30 in the morning (at least... it's 3:15 now) to be sure I read until I could no more.

I put you on a pillar to JK Rowling. I enjoy this story MORE than I enjoy "Harry Potter" (which is saying something, considering that I enjoyed that book as much as Genrou apparently does).

As I reread the last two chapters, I found myself shaking. I want to make a movie version of this fic! (Of course, I want to play Nuriko. XP) Tears welled in my eyes exactly on cue to when Ryuen felt he was about to cry. I feel such a connection to each of the characters. Plus, I go around reciting the jokes in this story. (I think it's usually the one about "I'll hold you forever" "You can't; it'll be difficult to ski that way" or something along those lines).

Now, it is extremely late and I have finals. So, sadly, I must bid this story adieu for tonight. May its plot grow as I sleep.

oh hell no! no you don't! *grabs author and drags her back* you can't leave it like that! they've gotta have sex at some point! oh...and beat miboshi...i get the feeling theres a lot more left, that miboshi won't be tricked that easily which can only mean more good drama! so write away! and update it sometime soon again please! pretty please with sugar on top! *gives her puppy dog eyes*

*is happy because she thinks she's the first to get it*

"CHAPTER TITLE AKUGI:

So I said,

"How about

Coffee with Nakago?"

Okay, nevermind.

"

"And I said

"What about about

Breakfast at Tiffany's"

I guess you'll never finish it, will you? It's a pity, I'll tell you that, but I'll remember it, and cherish it. So, thanks for all the fun I've had reading

yes! chuin and ayuru all the way! sai and ryu are so cute together! great story, cant wait til next chapter!

ja ne

kawai! the whole concept of Nakago and Tomo together is a little mind boggling but cute in this case _ btw what happened to Suboshi? Good fic! Update soon!

You have no idea how much I love this fic. Honestly. I'm sitting here at work laughing my butt off and all my co-workers are looking at me funny. It's great. XD

First of all, I love this story, I love the one before it, they rule. However, I'm going to explode from laughter or weirded-outness if I don't say that...Sai...is EXACTLY like my boyfriend. EXACTLY. And I act very much like Ryuuen around him, especially when it comes to paying for things. It's SCARY! And after so many times of reading these two fics, it's only occurred to me NOW. Ignore this review, it really has nothing to do with anything, but I just HAD to write about this to SOMEONE. Yeah... Keep up the good work! *dorky thumbs up*

you should update this story soon. and you must. why? cause this is a fucking great story! oh gosh, now i am starting to speak like tasuki. update!

NAA! That's IT? Come on! Write more! Just like I will when I have time! _ Pleeaase? These two stories were SO COOL! WAII! *glomp*

O.O *eyes are wide with shock* How did you write something like this! I mean, both stories are so great, adn... their's so much fluff and humor and angst and romance and drama at the same time, and it's just so well written! I mean, I love this! You are such a great writer, and I can really connect with the characters, especially Nuriko/Ryuuen! Nuriko is my favorite character, and I cried for three days straight when he died. HOW COULD THEY KILL SOMEONE LIKE THAT? TT Oh well. At least they're all back in your wonderful, amazing, awe-bringing *rambles for a while* Anyway, Nuriko's mind is really funny! Please update soon!

Hullo Purple Mouse,

I love your story very very well written definately a 10/10! _

I LOVE Ryuuen's personality! And Sai's and Tasuki's- EVERYONES!

*cough* Anyway I was just looking at other peoples reviews and noticed that you haven't updated your story in a while. I hope everything is alright!

Please continue with such an amazing story! I can't wait for more! *hint hint wink wink* _

Sincerely,

Tara M.

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Yesterday is history

Tomorrow is a mystery

Today is a gift... that’s why it’s called the present

Heh.

IlovethisficlemmestapleChuin'sforehead.

Eheheh. Anyway.

Ryuuen is adorable. -faint smile- And Ayuru is clueless.

-stage lights, theater setting-

-sings- When it comes to love...

Yeah. Write, darnit. -staples Chuin's head-