Wow, that was an excellent story! I liked all of the Jewish culture you included, it actually taught me a lot. Good explanation of why Ziva didn't used to be religious, by the way.

I think you really had Ziva's voice down. It was quite in character, which is definitely not the easiest thing to do, so I commend you on that. I usually say a specific part of the story I liked when I review something, but I'm not going to do that here because I liked all of it. Update soon, pretty please?

Star

Intresting, I don't usually read 1st person POV but you made it work, I also learnt a lot about Jewish practice. Well done.

Good story.

I learned more about Judaic practices.

And interesting take on Ziva's attachment to Tony.