Is that it? It's really good I think you should write more!

I really like your story, Ren is a belivable OC, the plot is very good so far, your writing skills are fabulous!

I've read this fanfic four times now and havent had enough.

Why havent you updated this story? Is it beacuse there are not enough reviews to make you inspired? If that so then please! don't stop.
I really want to know whats going to happen next!

:)

This is my second time reading this, and I have to say, I'm just as excited to find out what happens next as I was the first time! Ren is quite a kid, I really enjoy his internal monologues. Sometimes he seems a little precocious for a nine-year-old, but he takes after his dad, I guess! Lol. I hope that at some point there will be more chapters!

Oh how I love this fic, let me count the ways…Okay, so I had to really think about what I wanted to say as I didn’t want to leave the generic review simply saying please continue. I was hopping to write something to help inspire you to continue a story you left two years ago. Don’t know if I will succeed or not but I am going to give it a go. To say I love this story is an understatement. I have been searching for a fic that dealt with the idea that the turtles could have children and if so how would that change their lives. Then I found this story and my search was over! I agree that working with an original character is difficult because a lot of the time it shifts the focus of the story too much on the new character. However, you solved that brilliantly by putting it in Ren’s pov so as a reader the turtles remain the main focus. It is Ren’s lack of knowledge of what is happening that is driving the plot forward. I absolutely love seeing Leonardo as the devoted father, I think it is just such a perfect role for him and I don’t think Raph is mean he is just making the best of what has been dealt him. Much the same as what Leo has done. Please don’t let this story fade off into the dark abyss of unfinished stories. Anything this good is worth finishing, and anything that is this well done, by its very nature, will be difficult to finish but worth all the effort.

Teoryn

this story is good.update soon

Please Please update this story! I'm dying to know what happens next!

OMG! I know it's been a while, but could u please, please, PLEASE add more to this story. You are such a wonderful writer, I've fallen in love with this piece. Man, I'm a college student, and I've got class in the morning, but I stayed up till practically 2am reading this. I love it. Thank you for writing.

you know...i am loving this so far...it seems dark and foreboding...and im loving the rocky relationship between ren and raph...

am even loving the way raph calls him miren...

O.O...

::scurries to read more::

cool

I think this is a pretty good story. Please update soon!

TCT

Ack! You are my new favourite person in the entire world! You're writing is so...incredible, so multi-dimensional and in character and just so damn entertaining. I really hope you're planning on updating this.

hehehe, i love it!! poor Raph!! and Ren! please update soon! SOON!

Well, I FINALLY read this chapter. I read the whole story but the last time this chapter would not load so I didn't get to read the whole chapter. :( So now I did!

I am enjoying this chapter and I hope you'll be able to finish it sometime.

What does Izou mean? And also seshuu mean?

*wince* Yowch, poor Raph. I don't blame Ren at all. I like the change Ren is experience towards Raphael..guilt trips, gotta love them. Can't wait to see more of course. I hope that selected beta of yours is nagging away ;)

Splinter! You're back! *gasp* And here I thought you'd died. ;-) I had just about given up on this fic and nearly jumped out of my seat with joy when I saw an update! Raph saved the day! Horray--and I loved Ren's disbelief over his concern. I wonder what Leo and Ren are going to end up doing. Hm...

Well, I've kinda dropped out of the fandom for the past year or two, but I'll come back in for this fic! And if you're still looking for a beta, I won't have that much time on my hands, but I certainly wouldn't mind bouncing ideas around with you online or via email! Let me know!

Lovely writing as always! I'm so glad to hear you're finishing it.

Hmm...perhaps I should make more of an effort to finish my own baby... ;)