OH MY GOD I CRIED WHYYYY DID YOU DO THAT TO MEEEE?

but it was really good. great job ;)

loved it!

Oh wow...that kind of made me depressed. In a good way though.

I myself do not enjoy this fanfic for one reason and one reason alone. I saw the 'young man' as a user, instead of David as shallow. But that's just me. I may be biased, due to the fact that David seems to be the ideal man. He's not perfect, and he has his flaws, but there was something about him that struck me as real. The 'young man', on the other hand, was cast as flawless and beautiful which made him an unappealing character to me.

ooooooooooooooooooooh nicely done! it's a good way to hone in on what a nasty little butt that i think david is :]

i swear the whole time i watched that movie, something about David seemed so off to me! it was so weird! and you hit th enail on the head :]

great, great great work!