Great, now I'm tearing up... *sob*

That was great, very emotional, but not cheesy. You have a talent!

An interesting concept here. I like your description, and I definitely like that you've taken a situation we all know very well and put a fresh spin on it. Definitely keep with the one shots. :)

And I agree, AC makes me crazy too. :P

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AWWWWWWWWW! A real tear jerker. Roach has accepted death like Ghost. I wish they did not have to die like that. I love it. Make another one-shot. And finish the other story as well.

Awwww I loved this! You did a great job writing thins :D