 KendrixTermina 12/16/11 . chapter 1Magnificent |
 CluelessMajor 8/21/11 . chapter 1 OMG! OMG! o that was... wow... I'm totally speechless! I've been looking for a believable story about Inu no Kimi and Inu no Taisho... and I believe I found it! D I refused to believe Inupapa didn't care for Sesshymama, but he just loved Izayoi more...
Ahhh, I love this fanfic so much! D |
 Morzan's Elvish Daughter 1/23/11 . chapter 1Ouch... My head hurts, just thinking of all the spelling mistakes.
I do not spell well either, but to make up for that I use spell check, and I go over my stories four or five times just looking for gramer and pure word mistakes. Such as this one- "THERE first pup came half a DECAY after their mating." "THEIR first pup came half a DECADE after their mating"
I'm not going to look for all of them, if only because I would pass the 10000 character limit if I did. :) |
 icegirljenni 1/15/11 . chapter 1A very touching story. I always stand on Sesshymom side. As a women we know the the pain they have suffered. She was all a happy women before Izayoi appear. She has a trusted husband, she has a happily family. Its all gone with another women. I don't hate neither Izayoi nor Inu no taisho. I know sometime when love comes no one can escape. I think I blame the fate though. I know Taisho about to explain to Sesshymom but which women will not mad when they know their husband cheating? I regret though to why Taisho didn't find a way to explain himself. Although I doubt Sesshymom will listen, but a life mate always a life mate, somehow they will under and is all matter of time. Taisho didn't take initiative to do his part and am sad. I love the storyline, you have perfectly written down what I had in my mind. I search everywhere about the story of Sesshymom found out Taisho cheating but you have got the best one here. Thanks for sharing and keep it up your good work.
Your last sentences make me cry ... Yes poor mother and son ... |
 Taraah36 1/14/11 . chapter 1Wow! This was really heart touching! It must hurt so bad to be angry with someone for so long, remove them from your life, and then be the last ones to see them alive. This really brought tears to my eyes. The story line was excellent! In the end he chose his children, both of them. I suppose Sesshomaru will come to understand that. Even though he was not faithful he would not allow his mate to grieve further by losing their son, he would be enough.
I will be recommending this story to a few people. By the way you have a lot of grammatical errors. Please go back over this story and fix all you can :-)
I look forward to reading more from you :-DDd |
 Echo Uchiha 1/12/11 . chapter 1awesome! |