You're not going to end it there are you? What happens to Alec and what is in jail for this time? Does Logan and Max go the cabin? And what about this doctor from Manticore what's her dealio in the story?

So many questions unanswered. But, I do like the story so far...:)

Jeanette

Great story, you should keep it going !

so that's the end? Can't you write a teensy bit more?

Don't you ever frighten me like that again. Do you want me to have a cardiovascuar arrest?

Ahem. Logan has blue eyes.

Ahhh, sooo promising and no bannana!

you write very hot and i like my stories with chilli! Could we pleeeese have just one more chapter where they actually you know, makeit?

Actuaally it was a great ending because it just brought back all the fan angst from the episode where she said " tis will wait right?

Mna, you have got to be at least 19 yrs old to remember that song!

Its super funny...

I'm readin'I'm reviewing... what more dod ya want?

D'oh! So close! You tease! more please

you keep writing this great stuff! brill!

more. i need more

woo hoo!

more more more

yes, yes yes

This was a great story, Kimmy! Is this the end of this part? Poor Max and Logan...always too busy to "get busy" ;) Hopefully their day will come soon. And there's a sequel to this, huh? Great! :D You're really on a roll. Which is great since, with DA wrapping up the season over here, fanfic is going to be my only DA resource pretty soon :P As long as there's good fics like this floating around I should be okay. So keep writing!

This was a wonderful chapter! Dramatic. And we get to learn who Yasmine is...very interesting character, and very real. I've said before you have a knack for creating them. And this chapter ends well. One more to go!