I kind of like Emma...there were not many ways in that time for a woman to control her own destiny. I really hope the muse or inspiration strikes you to write more on this at some point. I would eagerly await the rest of the tale...now that you have me completely sucked in.-J

This chapter wasn't written...it was painted. With a master's brush, I might add. The descriptions...the level of detail...the depth of the characterization. So rich and textured. Brilliant!-J

Still doing such a good job of dragging me into this...the internal monologue and self-introspection coupled with the developing mystery...it's just compelling.-J

Still completely drawn into this tale. I loved the dialogue between Josh and Jason. So natural. That's a gift right there to write such easy and natural dialogue.-J

I really like this so far. I admit to being unfamiliar with some particulars. The show aired a while before I was born and I only recently discovered it and was only able to scrounge up the first season at the library. That is neither here nor there though. I could see this clearly playing out as if I was watching it. I look forward to reading the rest of this as well. Very, very good.-J

Well...I am impressed with the way you put words together. Very vivid and wonderful graphic images.

Careful of anachronisms espicially the college student tone of conversation.

Although honestly I dont know how I would make words between characters who are forced to examine themselves in a life and death situation beyond the grunts you would expect from cowboys back then.

All in all...I liked this very much.

Whoo Hoo! There ya go - getting you back into the swing of things...

Keep it coming! :)

I can just see Josh talking to the waitress (sigh). I love that never say die attitude

you have the characters mannerisms and speech patterns down pat. Can't wait for more!

Intriguing and gritty moment. I liked that you included Jason, and its great to see some WDoA fic finally popping up on here..I was beginning to think I was the only fan!

I'm liking it even if I don't remember the show it was based off too well. It is wrong that I am wanting Burns to get away? I know sick-o right? I can't help it if I watched the first five minutes of Child's Play again this morning... :)